Chapter 5 - Part 3: Week 16 Progress (Patreon)

Hey homies,

Things were a little slower on the rendering side of things this week. I've been much more interested in trying to catch up on the script, and with trying to finalise some last-minute changes I've been mulling over. These changes aren't anything major at all; I'm just attempting to rearrange certain events to hopefully make the climax more impactful. I definitely haven't sorted it all out yet, since I'm still juggling a few of those issues, but overall, it feels like I'm making the right choice with these alterations.I also decided to cut some of the fat from section 11 again. It was feeling a little bloated in certain sections, and it felt appropriate to try speeding things along rather than lingering. I've had a bad habit of letting conversations drag on in the past, and I'm trying to break the habit. Hopefully, I don't trim too much, but I can always come back later and add more if needed. Although I imagine people will probably want as little filler as possible with this release. I can't think of anything else at the moment, so I'll leave it here for today. I hope you all have another great week.Much loveJB