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ay! Back to Sydney and crew!

A few quick explanations. Sydney is practicing keeping the orbs off to the side somewhere as there will probably be situations where they can get in the way while orbiting her head. Such as sparring. She loses concentration when she starts fronting on Seneca, which is why they float back to orbit her. I didn't feel like there was a good place to put that information on the page without breaking up the flow, so, in the comment it goes.

She should probably be keeping them like, ten feet to her left, and not sitting on the ground. Landing on a totally inflexible ball would suck. Imaging getting into a fight in a bar and you get flipped and land kidney first on a cue ball. That would leave a bruise.

Second, I didn't forget her glasses. She's obviously not going to wear them while sparring, even if they're super tough space tech. Getting those nose pads smashed into your nose... sides (no idea if there's an actual name for that part of the nose) would probably leave you with a considerable snore. And, you know, general pain.  

Thirdly, I'm trying out a few things with the art in an effort to speed things up just a bit without compromising too much. Most notably I'm trying to cool it just a bit on the depth of the color shading. I went back and read a bit of the comic and hit that part where they're discussing starting up the dungeon project. I did totally flat colors there because I was just sick enough that I could work, but my already abysmal speed was halved or worse. Totally flat is too flat. I don't think two-tone cell shading will satisfy me, so this page is 3-tone. Flat, shadow, highlights and some blending in between. I think I'll up it to maybe a 4-tone - basically this with some dark ambient occlusion shadows added in. Then we'll see how long I can maintain that before I start adding in more and more shading again. 

I also colored my pencils instead of inking, but I don't think I'll keep doing that. Cleaning up the pencils probably took longer than just inking them. I think the line weights are a little more varied this way, but it's probably barely noticeable to most people. 

Oh, the golf clap (hopefully that's legible) in panel 5 isn't for the throw, it's for Jabber bending over like she does. She's flexible and doesn't mind people looking at her butt, so why not?

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Justaguy

Given that when we first met her she was using essentially a postpack to cart them around, I wonder if she could have a strap on her belt with clips, Pokeball style. A simple cover placed over that would allow much more descretion when required, or control when distracted or needed.

Jared

Considering her orbs can be useful in a spar, I wonder how good it is to be practicing keeping her orbs out of the way rather than making proper use of them.

Matthew Dodgen

Kinda wishing she went with "nope it's canon now" at the end there. 🤣

Michael Obert

I have never been more envious of Sydney than I am of that lovely shot of Jabberwocky in panel 5 😍 The golf clap seems thoroughly understated.

Thomas Dorner

The pads usually sit on the (nasal) bridge.

Marc Vun Kannon

How does anybody throw Sydney when she has featherfall? She should be grabbing the flight orb to go down faster.

codesurfer

wonder how long until she can start using the orbs in her martial arts. An immovable weight flying around would be pretty strong

Greg Morrow

Admittedly, this probably doesn't apply to Jabs, but back damage accumulates slowly with misuse, not just sudden failure. In principle, you should bend at the knees every time instead of bending at the waist.

Gelatinous Cube

Why are legwarmers sexy?! I don't get it, but I'm down! And doesn't matter whether you're with Sydney or the peanut gallery, you're getting a little more than a golf clap's worth of Jabs.

Town Crier

Sir! Your toes need work. There. I said it. Back to the silliness in 3... 2... 1...

Brad Kirkwood

I wonder if Seneca will be annoyed at Sydney for distracting her and getting her punched in the face?

Brett Peirce

"floating out of the way" is TOTALLY not an excuse for you to not have to go back and draw them in when you forget them... "No she's just making them hide behind her boyfriend and you can't see them from this angle" Totally not that

Edward Farnbauch

I don’t know enough about art to tell you why I love this page. But I love this page. There is something about this change to art style that I think makes it possibly your best ever style to me.

Adam C.

The three-tone looks very nice. Better than your standard, actually. And the pencils, rather than inking, really works.

Diego Rossi

"Getting those nose pads smashed into your nose... sides (no idea if there's an actual name for that part of the nose) would probably leave you with a considerable snore. And, you know, general pain. " It happened to me a couple of weeks ago. Got some microfracture to the nose bridge. Painful for a few moments, then it stay tender for a couple of weeks. Curiously, no bruise.

Jared Juetten

I think your shading in this comic is just fine! The flat-two-tone was... too flat for sure. I didn't MIND it... it's just not you. Not even ORIGINAL you. I sometimes miss your art from, say, Page 8. :D

Ian Brown

I love that Math & Co. are in the back golf-clapping at J-Dubs' derrière. I'm even more tickled that looks like Frix is perturbed and seems to think they're clapping at Syd getting tossed. Some folks are about to get thrown a beating from a 9-Foot tall Husky! LOL

Aaron Mauthe

Seneca’s about to catch a Sydney-distracted-me-punch. Which is never thrown by Sydney, oddly enough

Scott Brown

I'm not entirely sure getting hit in the nose would cause you to have a considerable *snore*, so guessing that's a typo, FYI ;)

G2 Shane

That area is known as the bridge of the nose.

Kevin Wright

I love the golf clap and would totally be participating. Both views of Jabber in that panel are worthy.

Scott Brown

Also, the latest Aether's Revival is do out soon :)