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A large portion of Stygans are martially obsessed - they're not totally a monoculture like Klingons or Ferengi, but the ones that aren't are like an Asian guy in the 80's. Everyone just assumes he knows kung fu.

Maxima's not wrong, that a Stygan turning down a duel would be notable, especially one wearing an armored cuirass in public - but it's not like there's never been a Stygan that's gone out on the town looking to get some dinner, dancing, dating and dueling in, and wound up eating a fermented Brax roe burrito and discovered that his sphincters are sequentially and rapidly losing their own duels with his meal. Saying "I'd love to duel but my butt is about to dishonor me all over the dance floor." is a perfectly acceptable response. No one wants to experience Saturday Night Dengue Fever in the middle of a grapple. 

Yeah, there are Stygan dickheads who will look for non-martial edges to bolster their own egos, but it's really martial reputation that most of them are after, and some guy who squirts Visine into his opponent's water bottle with wind up being ridiculed and shunned, not lauded for his prowess. I mean... usually. There are always little echo chamber cliques of cult-of-personality sycophants, but they are thankfully few and far between in Stygan society.

I realize while reading the page just before posting it, but in Panel 5, Samketh (the mouthy punk) is supposed to be implying that him talking during the duel up to this point was his attempt to distract Max/Egoma with banter, but unless you happen to have my brain, (and I suspect very few people do) I'm not sure that's at all clear. I think it reads more like he's implying that Max was the one being chatty, except that doesn't make sense as the only thing she said since the duel started was "Give me back my funnel cake," and that wasn't even directed at him. 

And by the way, "Egoma" is my attempt to extend the naming convention I used with the alien mercenaries that attacked the team in New York. They were all anagrams of Greek letters. Egoma is obviously Omega, Detla... I hope I don't have to tell you what letter that is. Lapha is Alpha. Garamm is... Well, it's Gamma, only I somehow managed to stick an "R" in there cause sometimes me not brain good. I probably can't run with that scheme for too much longer because a lot of Greek letters have very short names. I mean, "Rho" can only become "Roh" or "Hor," probably not the best name. Or "Ohr," or "Orh."

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Czarzhan

Not to mention "Ip" Bur if you go with "Orh" at some point, just have them teamed with the siblings Aand and Buht. Not from Greek, but they bring things together nicely...

Tie Toter

Sydney being reasonable...?

Chimera80

I feel that normally it wouldn’t be “one fall for you”, it would be “one knockdown/takedown to your opponent”

Mathew Aaberg

Time for Maxima to smack this punk down with successive backhands. Also never noticed the naming convention, clever way to create familiar but alien names.

Michael Obert

Time to whip out that secret technique he was saving for just this occasion. . .right. . .right?

Town Crier

Hmm. At what point do the punk's elders/minders step in and end his nonsense? I mean, it is obvious that Egoma is being careful not to damage the kid, but, come on!, there still needs to be a point where it gets to be just too embarrassing, or there are no more real lessons for the punk to learn.

Peabody

Lower left corner of last panel, looks like this whole thing is drawing attention.

Justaguy

Having a companions name of Ohr would present some interesting conversational gambits .. We "Could do X, O(h)r..."

Stephen Gilberg

"Tzerki" sounds a lot like "turkey." Might not be an accident.

eddi_TBH

It's not often Max gets to have fun like this. Her battles are usually life and death matters. Amusing herself at the expense of noble with a big ego and a small brain is an excellent way to relax before she has to go back to fighting for real.

akrasia

...who else thinks that using the name of an actual Stygan is going to bite Max on the ass? What happens when it turns out there was only one Egoma, who went missing under suspicious circumstances...