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One of the big problems with doing a huge arena battle in a comic like this is… well, there's a lot less humorous antics going on, which is largely the meat and potatoes of the comic. The other problem is that if this were a Shonen manga, none of these competitors would really go down this easily. They'd each all be big fights that lasted dozens of pages, if not spanning multiple volumes, in which the protagonist has to learn some new ability or apply an existing one in a suspiciously flexible way. Or just flexed his power slightly harder. It would probably involve a flashback. For instance, Zerathax (the obsidian golem) would definitely be able to use his fire side to create thrust, Iron Man style, and fly around setting the battlefield on fire. Being broken in half really does very little to threaten his life, it robs him of his ice powers, but is mostly an inconvenience. And he can melt sand down to make new obsidian to reform his body, which may or may not be quite how it works, but is close enough for a 13 year-old Shonen manga main character to deliver an expository speech about while watching Zerathax convert sand and add it to his body, and most readers just go, "Eh, I don't feel like searching for a refresher course on igneous rock right now. Besides, the person the MC is explaining this to is a stick-with-boobs who is inexplicably wearing a bikini top in this battle arena scene." But I really don't want to make each and every fight some hyper extended battle where the protagonist barely scrapes by but learns and grows along the way. Lore-wise, it's because Max isn't 14 and didn't just get her powers. She's a 20 year vet with them at this point, and all her fights have been against other supers. (And sometimes against foreign military hardware) It's why she thought whatever she did to Eat-Chicken might have a chance of working the way it did. Non-lore-wise... uh, real world-wise, it's because this UCBA storyline would take me 8 years to draw if every fight was done shonen jump style. Maybe if I could put out 5 pages a week, I'd extend the fight scenes a little, but instead I guess I'm going for something in between a typical Shonen and the one-punch fights of One Punch Man. It feels like half-measures either way, so I'm considering how to work the final round so that it doesn't take 6 months to get through, but still have some cool moments. 

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Chris Giesy

It's an "Unstoppable Force Imovable Object" thing, except we're seeing new and exciting things done with it.

James C

Only wrapped around one leg? So, she's more likely to flail him "puny mountain" style than topple him AT-AT style?

Nathan Wilson

This is a little Tom and Jerry, just turning an opponent into a literal ribbon of fire flesh that she wraps around another opponent? That's shenanigans, and not at all how flesh works. Even a literal block of metal wouldn't be that easy to turn into a ribbon or wire that quickly, no matter how fast you were. Gotta think about cooling times and stuff. But... I don't actually mind that much. It's still a cool spectacle, and as you said, you can't draw this whole arc over years. So, I'm down for a few shenanigans, especially if it makes for cool panels like above.

Sir Butcher

Personally, I am perfectly happy with the flow. Sure, a ten man team could churn out but eeeeh. It is clear what is going on, so I am happy.

Michael Obert

I'm honestly glad this isn't Shonen style; the older I get, the more those drawn out fight scenes wear on me 😮‍💨. Looks like Eat Chicken is now Buffalo Style Eat-Chicken. 🐔🔥🔥🔥🔥

Czarzhan

She only has so much E-CR (Eat-Chicken Ribbon), so she has to do them one at a time.

Sharien

ooooh that looks like it might be the mother of all cutting charges about to go boom XD

Town Crier

As Sydney once said, when a bad guy stated, "No weapon can pierce my armor, and my claws can cut through anything." "One of those statements must be true." *slap* "AAAAAAAAUGH!"

Town Crier

As Eats Chicken is turned into a nuclear version of Det Cord.

Brittany Huckey

I haven read shone manga but I feel like your pacing for this fight is remarkably well suited for your comic. Max is finally able to let loose her full powers. Its incredible! She gets to flex her usually held back power. It is fun to be able to see her do that. I hope she gets herself another mercury shake after this

LucasTheLost

Err.. "false". One of those statements must be false. I seriously considered writing that as "flase" because the retentive corrector letting a typo by would be funny, but since it didn't happen organically it didn't feel right.

LucasTheLost

"Johnson and Johnson mercury shakes, now in a convenient 'bite through' glass container"

Raymond Dannelly

I would place a small amount of money betting on what happens next, because I think the odds are high enough that a low investment might pay off well. But I would not wager a large amount of money, as I am very likely to lose it.

Richard Riley

I mean, nothing is clear about the motion lines in the arena combat. He's just gone crazy with them to the point that they've morphed from Motion to Chaos lines. I don't mind the story pace but I reallllly want us to progress out of the arena focus to get away from Motion Chaos Spaghetti.

Forecaster

More like rocky mountain thigh

Nathan Walton

Damn, Maxima is getting pretty blase' about the casual murder of sapients, isn't she? Gray Anatomy, Zerathax, sure. Accidents and/or arguably survivable. But I don't think she could reasonably expect either participant (Eat Chicken, Kabloomoid) to survive this treatment. I know, I know, I'm also an absolute delight at parties.

John Clary

This is a "to the death match". Sentient enough to know there is a good possibility of not surviving the fight.

William Elliott

turning eat chicken into megaton grade det cord to alter the "landscape"... impressive...most impressive

William Elliott

I have a feeling shes about to make a new rock quarry out of said leg. Think det cord wrapped around a tree and detonated...but on a kilo to megaton of TNT energy level.

Anton Schleef

If you've ever watched an anime like Dragonball (Original, Z, GT, Super, etc.), Naruto, One Piece, or Bleach then you've seen the animated versions of those ridiculously long fight scenes, complete with the protagonist learning a new ability or applying an ability in a new way, flash backs, and other things that don't always make sense happening mid-fight.

Anton Schleef

Or she just 'created' the ultimate grappling line to trip the mountain all AT-ST style.

Tie Toter

Bet you're right!

Eric Loken

That first big battle at the restaurant took what, 3 years? I don't think any of us want that again. Plus I agree with Micheal Obert, I am too old for that kind of drawn out nonsense, it just tends to be boring, not cool. So, no, don't do that. Also don't forget that the reason a lot of those things are done that way is to pad out the page counts so they can make a 30 page (or whatever) comic in which 30 seconds of the actual fight occurred. And thus they can take 500 issues to tell their story. It's much the same reason DC and Marvel are super hero soap operas and they spend surprisingly little time doing anything heroic, they can't think of that many actual story lines for a demigod (especially after doing it for 80 years), so instead Lois Lane has an affair with Batman, Jean Grey has the devil's baby, Tony Stark's mother returns from the dead to take over the company and put him out on the street, superman's long last twin brother returns from god knows where to... its all the same crap as you see on the daytime soaps, but with super powers. So, again, no, don't do that. Try and keep to a tighter story than that. At least your twice a week schedule is a better reason for it to take years than the pages were just padded out so as to sell 5 times as many comics for the same story. Also, finally, is it just me, or does anyone else feel bad for Eat Chicken at this point?

Town Crier

I would have appreciated the "flase". Heh. And I stand... er... sit corectted.

Ron Jarrell

Unstoppable mountain, meet unbreakable rope. Face, ground, ground, face.

eddi_TBH

So Eat-Chicken did adapt. Good for it. We found out Max is a whiz in the kitchen. Not many can do a spiral cut like that with a regular sword. She now has a length of detcord and is putting it to good use.

eddi_TBH

Eat-Chicken knew the risks. Or at least it's agent did. Atrocitous is about to be left without a leg to stand on before Max renders him 'armless.

eddi_TBH

I'm holding out for the boom.

akrasia

Surely someone is whipping up an animated version of this battle? I'd like to see it when you're done :)

LucasTheLost

Por que no los dos? But given she's wrapping one leg? My money's on cutting charge.

Shremedy

Either that, energized monofiliment slicer