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Cora and crew are a work-hard play-hard type of team. They've all been in high-adrenaline life or death situations with each other, and Cora has definitely run loyalty with all the guys. They aren't just hired hands, they're... well, not a family, because they fuck. A lot. And there's a fair bit of down time during FTL flight, and games get played. 

To be clear, Maxima usually wears some kind of spray (or grit) that gives her a frosted look, to cut down on specularity and overall reflectiveness. She does not usually wear "advanced space" spray, due to a lack of access. The real reason for that is putting all that reflective crap all over her makes it take literally twice as long to draw her. 

All I'll tell you about the nurse's outfit is that it does include two red crosses. They're made out of tape, and I probably don't need to tell you where they're applied.

There was, expectedly, a lot of disagreement about whether or not co-ed showering and back-getting is cheating. The right answer, of course, is that's the matter is entirely up to the people involved. One thing I didn't see people taking much into consideration is the fact that Max is kind of used to getting away with a lot of stuff because of who she is. Everything from lots of little acts of insubordination, like taking umbrage with the fact that a lot of drill sergeant insult booties by calling them ladies. And then calling them out on it. "Oh, I see! Because the worst thing you can call a man is a woman! There's nothing lower or worth less respect, is there? Well guess what? I'm not only stronger than any man on this base, I'm probably stronger than every man on this base!" Que base-wide tug of war contest. (Like I've said, Max has mellowed out a bit since her teen-early 20's.) Up to other things that would probably have gotten a regular soldier demoted. Those sorts of incidents were few and far between, but when it comes right down to it, Maxima is a singular National Security Asset, and there are some people above other people who don't care if she disobeyed an order when she 1) still accomplished the mission and 2) every other government is a little bit scared of her. 

Now this isn't to say that Max decided to not-really fool around but just show her butt to a large alien man and let him get her back, and did so maliciously, thinking, "I'm so hot and famous there's no way anyone would be fool enough to dump me!" But there may be part of her psyche that tells her that things will go her way no matter what. 

BTW, a SNERK is the opposite of a SNORT. A snort is just a short laugh-snore. A snerk is the same thing, but an exhale. Like a laugh-nose-blow. I thought I'd clarify because I've seen some comments in the distant past where people were asking. 

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TrixieTurner

Honestly I thought you were doing this intentionally with Max to go against the Mary sues allegations that got lobbed around earlier. To show she’s still got some flaws, despite her staunch stick in the mud mentality even she falls prey to thinking she’s above it but then sleazing it up like everyone else cause she thinks she’s bullet proof. To see if that ever actually bites her in the butt or if she’s right and she can get away with whatever she wants. Cause she’s gotta be aware if she’s being hypocritical, she even acknowledges she was part of the juiced up situation happening in earshot off screen.

codesurfer

Max's outfit looks very comfy cute. Glad to see you are getting more expansive in your costume design.

TrixieTurner

Maybe they are a family, they’re already best described as categories on pornhub so what’s adding one more. Help me step medic I’m stuck.

Michael Obert

The crosses go over her eyes for sensually enhanced situations, duh.🤣 . I also can't figure out of Digit is perturbed because she was watching the advanced fighting (likely) tech or curious to see if she can build a unnecessarily complex device to deal with painfully turgid erections.

Scott Brown

Families don't have to be blood related, and Poly is a thing! ;)

He Who Must Drink Some Coffee

Suddenly I feel sorry for the people living in the neighboring apartments when I was living with my girlfriend in grad school. And then when my ex-wife and I were first engaged and then newlyweds. Not that we had conversations quite like *that*, but the neighbors probably felt the need sometimes to stuff their heads under their pillows or, in extreme cases, go for an impromptu midnight stroll. We tended to forget how thin the walls were...

Rainy Rider

Oh cool. To that end, every guy should be able to cheat on the girl they're with, because they're always WAY stronger than the women they're with. Perfect reasoning. GTFOH

Ronin21

Lol, never figured Maxima for the "fun buns" type. She looks cute like that

LucasTheLost

It would almost certainly involve harpoon. Hard pass.

William Elliott

well, hes yellowish...so would those be "green balls"?

Adam C.

She should keep using that spray on Earth. Her Chronicler's workload would decrease.

Stephen Gilberg

I don't care if I'm the only one who says this, but I would not be on that ship voluntarily.

Raymond Dannelly

Depends on the relevant colors of his oxygenated blood versus unoxygenated blood. Assuming he uses both blood and oxygen... pretty confidant Gellen does, but not everyone do.

Town Crier

...sitting around, eating their space burritos, drinking their space water out of space bottles, talking about space guys and their space issues, while the space tablet plays space YouTube videos. It's SOOOO high-tech! Bet Max will feel stupid when she finds out that the space shower included a neutral space helper-bot that would assist her with showering, including washing her back.

Dave Barrack

That's a curious takeaway, which, I think, says more about where you're coming from than what I wrote. I didn't think I came close to implying might makes right when it comes to interpersonal relationships, just that of all the myriad thought processes going on in Max's brain when she let a guy she isn't dating wash her back, like 1% of her psyche acknowledges that she has enjoyed a certain level of protection from her actions that goes beyond having a lot of armor. Is that why she did it? No. Could it have been a tiniest of factors influencing a spontaneous decision? Maybe. Is it foolish to think her political aegis extends to interpersonal relationships? Of course, that'd be insane. I was just pointing out that... I dunno, people are complex and not always ethically diagramming every choice they make out on a chalkboard before they act. Even if I had written "Max thinks she can cheat because she's strong." That would still be me as a writer explaining a single character's internal motivations, not me broadly advocating gender based infidelity.

Ron Jarrell

By the time she’s done the turgid erection would be firing the harpoon…

Anton Schleef

You're wasting your time, Dave. Trolls with idealogical agendas don't give a flying fuck about explanations, just terrorizing you and destroying your creations. Especially as it was blatantly apparent that you weren't saying she could get away with it because she's strong in the first place, so they _*had*_ to have ignored most of your blurb to get to their conclusion and have severely limited mental capabilities as well.

John C Butler

Max's innate sense of "I can get away with anything" kind of explains why she cuts Sydney so much slack. Sydney, as effectively a human spaceship, is an invaluable national security asset. Max sees a little of herself in Sydney.

Brett

I see a future nsfw art project ahead :P

TrixieTurner

I do hope at some point we will see Maxima getting those golden buns soaped up, would have been the highlight of this entire arc.

Prof Sai

The man/woman thing works both ways though. Calling a woman a man is equally an insult. That guy did it to Michelle Obama recently at a White house event. (Sorry for bringing it up.)

Vernon E. Parker III

Is it difficult for you to decide to not just descend into writing an X rated comic?

akrasia

Rainy, you do understand that telling a story with characters that have flaws, does NOT endorse those flaws? There's nothing glorifying or justifying the flaw here. Perhaps you should ask a question or ten before leaping to unjustified conclusions?

akrasia

I bet Max disabled it, because it insisted on washing ALL of her, repeatedly. On Cora's ship, why would it not??

Phoenix

Hah, for some reason I thought Gidget was the one on the left hand side of the panel, and Harem on the right. Gidget definitely never had the plot to begin with, so it seems in character for her to miss the point completely :) (For Harem, is that one alpha, beta, gamma, delta, or epsilon? Does she designate, externally for others or internally for herself? We see that she 'personalizes' her duplicates and maintains that individuality across a merge and re-instantiate... Does she use the plural in her internal monologue? Argue with herself? Oh nos... my ADHD meds may be wearing off, as Sydney would say).

Eric Loken

"a SNERK is the opposite of a SNORT." I used to post "snort" when I did exactly as described, but I kept getting people asking about it as they didn't understand, when I switched to "snerk" I didn't get questions. Also, yeah, listening to that would be ridiculous. Games like that are fun for those involved, but those not involved may have trouble taking you seriously afterwards.

William Burns

Rainy, here is Sir Arthur Conan Doyle, replying to your intellectual ancestor, about why Sherlock Holmes is not his author: "So please grip this fact with your cerebral tentacle: The doll and its maker are never identical." This is from a 1912 poem called "To An Undiscerning Critic."

eddi_TBH

Max's expressions are a story in themselves.

eddi_TBH

Gellen sure thought so.

eddi_TBH

And I'm off to find that poem. So many fans need to read it. edit: the place I found had an equally poetic response from said critic. Seems Sir Arthur and the critic were arguing about an insertion of real-world events into one of Doyle's stories. A not uncommon situation even today. https://www.arthur-conan-doyle.com/wiki/To_An_Undiscerning_Critic

Kevin Wright

"All I'll tell you about the nurse's outfit is that it does include two red crosses. They're made out of tape, and I probably don't need to tell you where they're applied." One on each butt cheek, obviously.

Michael Strödick

I can't unsee the window on Max's head! I need help!