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Fanfiction Critic (Patreon)

Published:
2018-04-20 20:39:19
Edited:
2021-03-13 22:05:53
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2026-06
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Raine critiques Kat's writing, suggested by Kamaro12!

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Markvincible

Yeah your not like that at all raine

Wolf guy

Not like that at all

Wolf guy

“A Risk of Raine”. No puns please.

LifeWulf

Who made you the fun/pun police?

LupusK

Yes you are.

Wolf guy

The same person who made me a member of the dab police

Elvenhunter84

Looks like Raine is _not interested in your fanfiction, Kat.

ArcadeDragon

Eric giving Kat 5 stars is the cutest thing he's ever done

coredumperror

Hahaha! I love the ongoing saga of Raine and Kat's Fanfic. Wait a sec... now that I think about it, isn't this like, super creepy? Writing erotica about characters you like in fiction is one thing. But Kat's writing erotica about *her friends*. That's weeeeeird.

InTheLionsDen

After her "I'm not like that at all!" line we just need Zen to put his arm around her and whisper in her ear "I knew it was just an act. Good to know."

Ketzal

68.5 in fact

noxamillion

I'm guessing Raine has not looked herself in a mirror in forever now. Also, Kat's expression is gold!

Kaija

"Knot intrested"? 8D

Kaija

Kat is full of Judgement XD!

Finn Brenner

Yeah Raine, I’m not shy or socially awkward either,

Steve Gloria

Captian America: I understood that reference

Steve Gloria

Raine...not awkward....what? Are we talking about the same Raine?

dylan hogan

I love the "⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ -Eric" on the back.

KattTastic161

*coughs* Yes you are Raine, but we still love you :)

DarthLeonite

C’mon Raine! That personality is why we love you! Heje

Edmund Sirus

What happend to "raine is my girlfriend"?

Mattgames4110

We love you Raine because you are kind, sweet and gentle and no one can change that Raine. you may be shy but you will always be in are haerts.

csstats

Haha, Kat's face makes this one for me. Silly Raine is so oblivious to how others see her. :D

Jordan Dean Ezekude

"Everyone else is perfect?" Like hell. They make Raine look like the diamond in their sordid rough.

Sylvrwolflol

Raine got him arrested for stalking and attempted sexual assault. Last I heard, he was a slave somewhere down in Wolf territory. I'm sure it's way below your pay grade, Mr. Sirus.

MoppyPuppy

Geez Raine really let herself go.

Carlysle Brown

5 stars by Eric? I wonder what Kat had to do to get that...

Lauren Appelquist

I think by that she meant that Kat nailed their personalities in her fanfic

Wolf guy

You are under arrest for dabbing. Anything you say can and will be used against you in the court of dab law. You have the right to an eterny before questioning. If you can’t afford one, one will be appointed to you.

Rhawkas

"Vol. 1" makes me wonder how many volumes there are (or at least planned). XD

SCD

Kathrin: Uh Raine, that’s how you really are. Raine: Oh my god, you’re right! I’m a living fan fiction character, NOOOOO!!!! Kathrin facepalms as hard as she can.

James Scott

"A Risk of Raine." Nice reference.

Lexio

Omg this is so cute XD and Kats reaction is priceless XD

Panther

There is nude portrait of Raine in the book ..... =^_^=

Panther

Why Raine is covering her breasts as Natani ? She's not trying to hide about her be a girl , meanwhile .......

tamtheotter

I think its because she still hasnt replaced her torn up shirt

Kuroko

Risk of Raine. Okay, who's gonna write it?

Jordan Dean Ezekude

...As far as Kat knows, yes. If anyone else reads it (particularly Keith and/or Natani), she'll be knee-deep in hot water.

Panther

Jermaine Jackson and Pia Zadora : "- And when the Raine begins to fail" XD

Panther

*looks at Kat* Oh , yes . I see =^_^=

DarthKeidran

I don’t know how I missed this. It’s hilarious because it’s true.

Onefoursix Tym

The game "Risk of Rain" has forever ruined my context for that phrase.

maxim v

that's an easy one... they can change to human at literally any moment, so they keep it on so... you know what can happen if they turn to human and it's not on... :/

m00nblades

I think we know~ *Winky face*

Randall Hendren

Ah Raine, how cute and innocent you are.

Rj

When I visited there and I saw him getting executed

Jackrabbit

well, OOC issue for Kat...