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Trace makes a promise after another nightmare, suggested by CrimsonHelsing!

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XannedOut

Very wholesome.Also, first!

coredumperror

This kind of comment is why Patreon needs a downvote.

Terra The Wizard

on the upside to getting these nightmares, he gets to have fluffy snuggles to feel better afterwards

Project #11

This would quickly escalate into hate. Not that I accuse you or anyone, it is just the way internet is. While no downvote is not perfect solution, it is good enough.

Project #11

Let's just hope fate (Tom Ex Machina) permits that he will make up to the promise.

Saberbeam

Kudos to CrimsonHelsing, you've been persisting with this suggestion for a while now. I always liked the sound of it and it's great that it got sketched, turned out great too! :D

AstroChaos

Ya, I vote for it every time it comes around but didn't expect we'd finally get it. Doesn't look exactly like I had in mind - first panel is just less scary - but it still works really well. Congrats!

Went Brown

Aww she's so cute. Funny furry Flora.

CrRAR

Fight, fight against the dying of the light~

Roughlandin

Who saves whom? The father who fights men and monsters within and without using mystical powers and arcane knowledge his waking mind at best half understands? The mother who took a man that the world screamed was a genocidal racist maniac into a relationship she was told would never work, and made a caring husband and loving father of one who in a former life would be her people's greatest enemy? Or the child, who challenges both father and mother to rise above their own baser natures and realize a better self, a better partner, a better union, a better world for their unborn love to wake to? Everyone needs saving. Everyone can save. The only question left is, who are you saving, and who is saving you?

Roughlandin

Do not go gentle into that good night

ElderScrollsMekkan

Thank you again so much, Tom, I loved the way this looked in the stream, and the scene steals my heart. Wholesome scenes like this with the Legacy family to be are what I live for! And it goes without saying how much I love these two ^w^ ❤️

Roughlandin

@ElderScrollsMekkan: Many thanks! *bows*

Shockblaster

All joking aside, this hurts me so much, even on a physical level Suffering from a combination of issues that can make me aggressive and hateful if things go wrong, this promise is what can keep me laying awake at night

Wild Space Saga

Is this a sign of things to come in the story proper? 'Cause now I'm a little worried.

Roughlandin

Naaaaaaaah. They'll be fiiiiiine. ...Probably.

Paul hage

this is like a medieval story like fanfiction where no matter who you save it's going to be for the better

Paul hage

also, this sounds like a telltale story

Ordithus

Flora looks so peaceful there with her Trace

Paul hage

trace somehow uses dark magic and accidentally changes everyone's race

Paul hage

Coredumperror, get the flamenwagon

Markvincible

What a crazy sketch, I hope trace can keep that promise of his

SCD

Freddy Krueger: But I will! Trace: 0_0

metalman20

seeing how it looks like chapter 21 is gonna be pretty dark, it seems that this might be a promise he won't be able to keep.

Reseen Dalls

It's together that they're all saviors. :)

Torbjörn Larsson

Hard to say, A down vote system means less negative criticism in other forms, while it is likely most people can ignore the down votes at leisure. (Unless your comment was personal, which in many cases unfortunately includes personal opinions.) Hopefully in a decade we will know these things, but it is a bit fluid right now (so interesting).

RivCA

Honestly, I prefer The Grey. Once more into the fray. Into the last good fight I will ever know. Live and die on this day. Live and die on this day.

JohnnyDSL

Where did you get that words!? They are so beautiful! Amén! Write a book, pls!

CrimsonQuill086

One day, I'll be able to write to that standard in the comments. One day, soon...Seriously, Roughlandin, you should be a professional author. Your comments are brilliant.

CrimsonQuill086

To quote MiracleOfSound's song, Reclaimer: 'Don't make a promise that you can't keep, Can't fix this madness, it runs too deep...' In all honesty, however, I hope that Trace can face his darkness within, and beat it, and become the best he can possibly be.