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Chapter 7!

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Briar Rae

Can’t even articulate how excited I am!!!!! “eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee” and so forth :3

Rose Davidson

gotta say i do think Taylor should have had _some_ reaction to "But I’m your neighbor, Taylor, and the guy who’s going to hate me the most? The one guy? It’s not going to be hard for him to find me." like maybe she should have a flash of "is it really worth keeping Gordo in my life"

July

I know it's a bit of a trope but I love the little gasp Max has at seeing the dress in the mirror... and I suspect that 'Maxine' noting how much 'she' loves the outfit isn't quite as farcical as it may seem... I love this story so much, though!

melody!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i love uncanny valley amerUK. the subtle stuff that makes it clear throughout that you have never been to america. i do not mean this as a neg. i have never met anyone in my entire life named willa and if i did i have no doubt they'd be 70

Briar Rae

I got to the end with the pills (revisited) stuff and was just doing the Kylo Ren gif thing shouting “more! MORE! MOAH!!” but like in a femme way. Anyway that was great, yr writing is so delightful and I love the way you develop your cast of goobers

Lucy Severine

This chapter was very fun (and I love seeing things go unambiguously right for Maxine) but I'm exceptionally excited for her to meet Coach

Samantha Louise

Chapter was so damn good! I squealed when I saw an update and was so excited while reading it!

Lizzie

Omg this story is so good. Love the built up and can't wait for the big reveals (Avery, the brother and the parents). This can't go on much longer without someone noticing. Maybe a surprise visit from Avery?

Briar Rae

I’ve been excitedly telling my partner about this and Dorley lately (even got them reading Dorley which they have super fell in love with!), but my partner needed something to call this story so just now they referred to it as “Untitled Goose Girl” XD

JasmineRGB

Goddddd this hurts me in the best possible way. They're both so precious.

Veryy

I’m just saying, you have got to appreciate the sheer audacity of Taylor manipulating her parents to make sure they don’t develop any relationship with their neighbours. I love this story! The stakes feel so high and I can’t wait to see how they resolve.

TenLeagues

I love that "he" has decided "he" likes the mental effects of the hormones. means everything else is gonna follow. also lmao Taylor reaching into his mouth. just friend things!

Emory Ahlberg

Damn, Alyson! Yet another amazing chapter. You're like a spitfire with this super fun story. The way you juggle the humor with the tension is just amazing. I can't wait to see how Max deals with the coach, and how "he" will cope with the changes that are coming. So good!