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UNTITLED CHEERLEADER STORY — CHAPTER 8 — HOW TO FLY (12.6k) (Patreon)

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Chapter! Probably the last one for a while as next up is finishing Dorley 40 :)

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Comments

Samantha Louise

This was so damn good. Max being happy, the euphoria, Taylor having some pronoun confusion and just the friend groups entire antics. Eddie’s mom being super cool. Chapter was great.

Jade Diaz

Hits me in the feels so hard every time Max feels a sense of euphoria

Bri

I love these dense, dorky lesbians.

JasmineRGB

I can't believe you've left us nervously waiting to see how the party goes, how dare you *checks notes* write a different story I'm also incredibly invested in :P This chapter was delightful, I can't wait for Gordo to go on holiday to England and mysteriously disappear.

Tamsin Davis-Langley

Oh, Max. Max, Max, Max. You sweet, clueless little egg. 💕 Also, Taylor? Clue phone, line 2: it’s for you! Dump the hunky football player and go be in lesbians with Maxine already! I love these adorable dumbasses so much. 🥰

Casey Rodriguez

Max starts off taking more birth control than they were told to and now they're also clearly going to start some weight gain... girl that weight is not going to go where you expect... Can't wait for the physical changes to quickly be too much to not be noticed

Zenmadster

Prefacing with the fact that I've enjoyed this enough to read it more than once, but that also drags out my inner editor? And I can't find a DM option. This chapter was the one where I saw "parks up", and only if you're stuck on the narration being American, it would just be "parks". There's one point where I know "messenger back" should be "messenger bag" (but I can't remember which chapter ^^;). The biggest thing is one tiny but major continuity issue that I may have missed a resolution for: Max has a lock he can slide shut in the first chapter, but then he (not changing pronouns until Max does) is shouting about wanting one on his door. It was about the third time through that I caught that ^^;

Zenmadster

While I'm on this soap box, and *also* related to this chapter, "Learning to Fly" could be a good title overall?

alysongreaves
>>135965865

I'm editing the first ten chapters at the moment, and I'm pretty sure I caught every back/bag—it's a common mistake I make, for some reason! I also spotted and corrected the lock in the first chapter. I'll zap 'parks up', though—good shout.

alysongreaves
>>135966570

I'm probably using something similar as the first book title but not the series title (on which I am still working!)

Zenmadster
>>135965865

I really do want to reiterate how much I like your writing, and I love that you have more than one "speed". Dorley ties me in knots, but this one just makes me happy. While occasionally tying me up in knots.