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When You Fell from Heaven — Chapter 15 — The Most Normal (15.4k words) (Patreon)

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I cut this chapter in half because the first half took way more words than I thought it would!

Content warning: mild transphobia-adjacent stuff

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Samantha Louise

This was so much fun! But now, poor Maxine I can just hear the Happy Mask Salesman, "You've suffered a terrible fate."

SevenFerns

Oh great, here comes the worlds biggest dysphoria attack. Also coupled with the possibility of the tailor getting confused by Max's body.

Aurora Fey

such a nice chapter!!! upcoming torture session notwithstanding, im so happy for max!

SevenFerns

I just wanna take these two kids and smoosh their faces together until they get on the same page

SinsofSenna

That cliffhanger is hilarious and brutal, oh my god

Veryy

Oh, fun. Pain. Delightful. Christ, but I hope she makes it out intact. Avery knowwws something!!! Favourite subplot btw. Lovely character stuff, bringing Willa up to speed and all. Kind of feels like the calm before the storm 😬. I thought this chapter might be school but now I’m wondering what catastrophic things we still have time for before school starts. Terrifying thoughts. Thanks for posting!

Emory Ahlberg

Oh my STARS! It's my two favorite early 2000's lesbians!

Maggie Heels

Just finished reading... OMG ❣️🫦

Mabel Zanders

i sense a dressing room breakdown in the near future

Lucy Severine

Eyyy this was glorious. I loved it so much. Glad my darling Willa-worm was able to work through her prejudices 🥺 And Maxine you just need to butch it up!! Embrace the butch!!

Steven Patt

I got a real kick out of this: “There’s time to be a feminist in college.”

SingularCurve
>>149098374

Yea, my first thought was "NO!! Not a suit!!" Especially if Max is getting even the slightest bit curvy in the right ways.

Briar Rae

I figured Willa was kind of an unexploded bomb about this (after an offhand comment she made in the first draft of book 1). But I’m glad she seems to be healing and doesn’t show signs of having black mold in her home 🥰

Zenmadster

I'm happy to see Willa get her stuff together, happy to see Taylor really admitting some things for herself, and absolutely terrified for Max. I trust you to put your characters through the "good" kind of hell (where they generally come out better in the end), but... church? Still loving this story, and every chapter, I find it just that much harder to wait for the next :p

Jess Fishenden

Amazing. Just wrench my heart around, thank you very much. ❤️

Harper Bradley

Amazing as always. And yeah... being a girl is really expensive (I like buying clothes now) :3

Valyusha

Women look hot in suits though....

KateW

Americanism alert: in the line "holidaying in the Land of Woman", that should probably be "vacationing". In USian, a holiday is usually a special day, like Christmas or 4th of July, not something you do.

KateW
>>149108959

When I was first transitioning--right around the time this story takes place, although I was a decade older--after more than a quarter-century of being forced to be a guy, 'butching it up' was the LAST thing I wanted to do. I wanted to GIRL! These days I'm butch af, I haven't worn a dress in 15 years, but it took a lot of soul-searching to get over my cinderella phase.

Lucy Severine
>>149108959

XD I well know but, in this instance it feels like the only way to mentally approach it and not scream

irreleverent

I've been adoring this story! I will note that "Clip around the ear" is a britishism. (I had to look it up to confirm it was the motion it sounded like)

alysongreaves
>>158397969

Ah, thank you! I'll have a look at that when I'm at the computer and maybe change it for the book release :)

irreleverent
>>158397969

Cool! I figured I'd point it out, but it's a pretty easy one for American readers to skim past. I didn't catch it until my second read through (the existance of which is a huge endorsement) and I didn't realize it was a britishism until I read another british author using it.

Reed M

it’s always so strange when you are rereading a book and you get to think about characters with later insight into their personality- some of them i like more than i did the first time, and some of them i like less