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Okay so the muse grabbed me. I promise more Dorley is coming.

Edit: fixed the reference to Caleb. Way too much Pretty Little Liars.

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moonside

oh we are being spoiiiiled, thank you <3

Antinoë

OMG BLESSED WITH MORE WYFFH just when i'm being kicked in the butt by pms, this is just what i needed - brb gonna go read more of max and tay's disaster lesbian adventures now :3

wry.Sxda

new wyffh thanks for the chapter 🥺 haven't finished it yet but im stuck thinking about Maxine in David Byrne cosplay

JasmineRGB

Ahhhhh just before bed! Thankfully this is the ONE of your stories where reading before bed isn't going to cause any horrific nightmares XD

Aurora Fey

thank you, muse! always happy to see more WYFFH!!

Lucy Severine

Eyyy I love this story so much it makes me very happy. I hope Justin doesn't turn out to be a shit, I kinda like him 💜

Miriam Robern

How did it take me four chapters to notice the cover image shift? >.<

Samantha Louise

OMG I loved this chapter! The tailor was such a fun character!

grrl

Fly, girl, fly! Minor, half joking, continuity note: idk shes gotta have gone to Staten Island at least once before and those assholes are all about columns.

Maggie Heels

Wow... wonderful chapter... I wonder if Maxine will meet Marina again some time in the future?

Samantha Gatica

I just love these gaybies so freaking much!

Anamorphose

I appreciate the guitar geek trivia too btw! Xxx

SingularCurve

Just got to love me some Gay Tailor/Taylors! Max has got this! I wish I could have had what she is getting!

Harper Bradley

This was a good treat to come home from work too. The suit stuff is so real, I unfortunately had to miss my cousins wedding just after my egg cracked because I just could not deal with getting a suit.

Isobel Bing

I lol'd when Maxine started getting sad that there are no queer people in New York. Poor baby

Veryy

This chapter brings joy and relief in equal measure. I thought the tailor would go SO much worse. Thanks for creating such a gem. Say, I wonder how old Marina is. Rosie is one more knot to deal with. And the parents! Twisted, tangled double life. I’m sure it’ll go fine. Oh my goodness they’re at school!! Is it that time already?

Endera

The tension keeps rising, hiding herself from her parents keeps becoming more complicated. I want good things for Max. Like discovering she likes having her hair pulled by Taylor. 😈

War4ged

Wait, Max's pictures are on the school website? And Avery is suspicious of Max? Uh oh. Also, as always, your writing is superb. I feel spoiled by having two new chapters in a week!

Zenmadster

I actually wonder if this works the other way round: my inner narrator starts out American, but almost immediately shifts to British when I see something like "until gone ten". Or if I just forget I'm reading something of a British/Canadian bent and run into something like "colour".

Zenmadster

I'm just happy your muse was on my side this time, considering this is my favorite. Even if it's weird that I'm excited for school to start :p

Cromalin

i read all 16 chapters 3 times in the past few days, this story just has a great energy and i love it so much! i hope things work out at school, because i think there's no way avery hasn't been following the cheerleading website and she's definitely got questions even more than she already did and max doesn't need any more stress than she's already got. hell, i'm stressed thinking about all the ways things could come crashing down for her and it's not my life!

Michelle Emerson

OMG!!! My new fav!! I need more.... give me! give me!