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Dragonslayer29

Well first off thank you for the chap. As this is my favorite of your stories. The second thing I have to say is Viserys real that much of a fucking idiot. I’m mean this guy is so stupid that not only has he stung his family who are dragon riders and closes allies but a lord paramount of the north as his nephew won’t be king. I do hope he and Leana marry before he is forced to marry Alicent. Also hope the whole family gives a big fuck you to Viserys. Can’t wait for the next update.

GrouchyGritic

Another great chapter! Nice seeing how the the faith is losing people ( seriously the gets so much money and no tax yet the poor stay poor yes the lords should help but the faiths mission is literally to help everyone and they are wealthy af where does it go?!) love the investigation too. I wonder if Rhaneya will be angry Laena thought worse of her…. And viserys you dumb ass how many people has he pissed of can someone help me make a list

Stemadaca

Remember when I said Viserys was a good king, not a great king in the last chapter? Well, I take it back. He's neither.

SkolldreadWolf00

Viserys you stuiped ass fool no matter what you do aenar will be king and deamon wants to tear you a part now you stuiped motherfucker along with everyone else there too!! Drinor good chapter can't wait for the next one!

JayFireblood

Loved the chapter, a little short but good

Ackerarts

Did no one notice? 'He wished for God to help him or for the Stranger to take him away.' the next thing that happened was the Old Man showing up and talking to the kid. Awesome Chapter.

TheWateringWizard

Nooooo you can’t leave us on such an evil cliffhanger!! I want to see the anger, the rage. I want people to shout at Viserys for being a fucking idiot. I want Aenar to tell him to go stuff himself.. You’re evil… but I loved the chapter. So good to see Kinvara build Rhllor’s Faith little by little… Maybe I forgot but what on earth is Viserys’ problem with Aenar ? Honestly, I’m not against Rhaenyra being the heir. It’s more fair to her as she’s Viserys’ only child compared to Aenar who’s his nephew. But the fact that Viserys did this on a grudge, taints the whole thing

Gummyking2

I don’t think I can wait another month for a chapter

Spooky

Is it just me or is Anyone else hoping that alicent has an (accident) as well as otto

Robert Brown

Thanks for the chapter!......And I can't wait to read about the fallout caused Viserys's stupid decisions made due to his jealousy.

FireKing500

I would like to see how Viserys can enforce the betrothal between Aenar and Alicent. He has no dragon as all the adult dragons are with Daemon, Aenar, Gael and Vhagar isn’t not tied Viserys. He is a fool and a fool who will get his due. Yea he can say he is the King and lord of House Targaryen but when you are the only person who agrees to it, no one will listen to you and ignore all commands. If Viserys tries to say Aenar has to stay in Kings Landing, well goodbye all support he has. He has insulted House Velaryon as Aenar and Laena marrying could have mended some of the wounds. I bet Aenar and Laena may try to marry under the Old Gods to spite Viserys. I hope you update very soon as I want to see everyone’s reaction.

Luna Wolf

Good chapter but viserys made his final fuck up lol. I have no sympathy for him or the storm that is coming. As for the pairing itself glad to see it’s still happening. but may want to have a chat happen between them soon, between the three so that things can be worked out. And avoid any prolonged unnesscarry drama xD. As for Alicent I look forward to seeing how aenar avoids her like the plague that she is and doesn’t consummate things between them. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.

Daeron Targaryen

Hmm, seems Viserys will waken the dragon, though I do hope Aenar will give Alicent some fun at least.

Gabe Sarti

Well, Viserys has truly shown that he is an idiot who just pissed off everyone in his family all because he is jealous of a child….. I would not blame Aenar if he just left Westeros out of spite and to get away from him and his reach.

Robert Hernandez

Viserys just screwed himself over cause house stark won't agree to the betrothal or Daemon. Jaehaerys set in stone who Aenar would be betrothed to and Otto will soon regrett this cause Aenar is hot on his trail for killing his Aunt and Cousin

Loyalist

This is horrible ( Viserys decision making, not the chapter. The chapter is fantastic and I hope to see this story updated soon) How can he make such decisions?!?!?!? A sorry excuse of a king Aenar will not submit to this shame!!!!! He is a TRUE dragon I look forward to the reaction of the family Aenar, I wouldn’t trust anything those masters write. Corrupt and stupid most of them

Loyalist

I hope all the damn Hightower and Old Town has an accident A 🔥 incident

Guest

Great chapter, please don't let us wait for entire month for another chapter

Eva Cole

I wonder how viscerys will finally realize has truly messed up. And I can't wait for the hightowers to get what they deserve

AJ

Wow that one way to start a war with the your family . The North will be angry and if he doesn’t call off the wedding he will lose daemon forever. Also he over reach with this decision because he didn’t even consult daemon about this decision which is a dangerous move because no matter how much love daemon has him it won’t stop him from challenging him if he has too

Amber

To d chapter but man oh man is daemon going to be mad.

Michael Marquardt

I feel like that's the only way those 3 can be together is leaving after this point cause he said alicent is not part of it

Michael Marquardt

I dont see why they would stay they have been kick out of the succession so why stay and the girls will go with him

Michael Marquardt

Didn't they just have a concil about this and his whole thing was a women can be king I get in the story there was only daemon to pass up but he just passed up the heir and the heirs heir just so that way he can have his way I feel no one will go for this

Michael Marquardt

Wow the man without a dragon just pissed off everyone that has one

Michael Marquardt

And sea smoke and the red queen are on Aenar's side as well since it was almost for sure going to have a velaryon wedding

Drinor

Viserys just dug the biggest hole for himself, and he doesn’t realize that he’s making it bigger. Aenar won’t just stand back and take it. He has Plans.

Drinor

I’m glad you liked it. Laena is angry with Nyra. She thinks that she betrayed Aenar. Viserys broke the world record of pissing off the most amount of people within a minute.

Drinor

I’m glad you liked it. Viserys will soon understand just how much he fucked up.

GrouchyGritic

People viserys has pissed off: his whole house, velaryons, the whole north, the Arryn and most of vale , the smallfolk, the red faith, any of daemons allies eg goldcloaks am I missing anyone?

Drinor

There will be a lot of rage… in the next chapter. Kinvara will want something in return from Aenar for helping him with the Faith of the Seven. Viserys is jealous of Aenar, and hearing people call Aenar the true King and other names during the Tourney, really pissed him since it made him feel as if people didn’t care about Baelon, about his son since they all seemed to have already made up their mind on who should be King.

Drinor

Remember the words that Alicent’s mother said: ‘You will doom us All.’

Drinor

Viserys’s decision is his biggest mistake, especially with what will happen in the future.

Drinor

Aenar will not just sit there and do nothing. Neither will Daemon who will be absolutely pissed since he knows Aenar loves Laena and Rhaenyra.

Drinor

Laena is angry with Rhaenyra since she believes that Nyra stabbed Aenar in the back. Alicent won’t have a good time that’s for sure.

Drinor

Viserys fucked up badly, but that’s nothing compared to what Aenar will do, especially when he succeeds in what Aegon and his sisters failed to do.

Spooky

Make it så epic it goes down in history (THE FIRE IN THE HIGHTOWER) and hope viserys gets the shit kicked out of him for this.

Gabe Sarti

I hate how we have to wait a whole month to find out what happens next!!!!

Drinor

Jaehaerys told Daemon that Aenar and Rhaenyra should marry who they want. The whole point of him saying that is because he doesn’t want to make the same mistake he did with his daughters. That’s why he didn’t approve of any betrothal when he was alive.

Drinor

Viserys is allowing someone else to call the shots. That’s his biggest weakness. Aenar will make a decision the next chapter that will change everything.

Drinor

Viserys will realize he fucked up badly when Aenar starts earning titles, and Rhaenyra hates him for his decision.

Robert Hernandez

Well Old Town is the seat of House Hightower and they do have deep connection with the maestars at the time it seems possible who knows

Spooky

If any reader was there what would u do to viserys and the hightowers??

FangRu

Did he even thought about consequences? Like bro you have no dragon on your side why do you think Aenar or Daemon would even accept this.

Drinor

There was no marriage pact, but he pissed off everyone else you mentioned. I’m not sure about House Arryn since Aemma was of House Arryn, and her daughter will become Queen.

Drinor

Well, he’s King, so he thinks that’s enough of a shield to protect himself.

FangRu

Yes that is usually the case but not when you stand against your own family full of dragons without yourself having one... 😂

GrouchyGritic

I think if rhaenrya shows she is upset they will be pissed plus they will still probably be allies in future

Loyalist

Burn them I mean Viserys doesn’t want Aenar to marry Rhaenyra? Okay, so you don’t want your daughter children to be Targaryen, have the loyalty of the North and of every able dragon rider How stupid can one man be?!?!?

maxime bégin

Will you make a flashback of what happen between Visery and Alicent that lead to this decision?

maxime bégin

I can’t wait to see that, how Alicent was able to manipulate Visery into making this horrible decision

Drinor

Yeah. I wasn’t expecting so many comments. I’m happy to read all of them, though.

thunderforth rc

Amazing chapter I just loved the suspense .when will the next one be out

thunderforth rc

Will you be having aenar rediscover how to remake valiryian steel

Ryder

Hey wasn’t there a betrothal of Aenar and Laena or at least a talk of it because if that’s the case House Velaryon was also insulted

Drinor

No, there was no Betrothal, and Rhaenys is even against it when Corlys brought it up.

Longclaw16

Well fuck. The action of making Rhaenyra heir was to spite Daemon in canon and now it's to spite Daemon and Aenar... to Aenar, who knows about the future, it's not necessarily a bad thing cause Rhaenyra is a good person who could be melded into the right way so that her mistakes can be ignored. Alicent not marrying Viserys would stop the formation of the Greens, but hot damn it causes a fuckup of all proportions. Not only the issues of the love of the trio, but I'm damn well certain Rhaenys and Corlys will now be pushing for Laenor and Laena to marry Rhaenyra and Viserys respectively.

Drinor

Aenar won’t just sit there and do nothing. He’s still Daemon’s son, so he will definitely do something drastic.

waitwosius

"something drastic" so aenar is going to be caught abed with both laena and rhaenyra, possibly the biggest "i'm him" moment possible

Brett Foley

The Good Queen should still have significant political sway… and she hates Alicent for claiming to be Saera. I see Alicent either having a very difficult betrothal as all of westeros learns of Alysanne’s displeasure or Alicent and Aenar having a marriage similar to Daemon and Rhea in canon. I’m now imagining Viserys bedding Alicent and trying to claim the children are Aenars - this is now my head cannon until you say otherwise.

Drinor

The Good Queen will be more furious than everyone else. Viserys won’t do that, but let’s wait and see what happens. Aenar will never accept something like that.

Francis Cincotti

Excellent chapter and series as always! Viserys screwed up big time, hopefully Aenor, Laena and Rhaenyra leave King's Landing asap. As for Viserys, we'll hopefully he'll meet his precious 7 soon enough.

Drinor

I’m glad you liked it. Aenar’s decision will change the future of Westeros.

Matt

Would be hilarious if Alicent is turned to ashes by Cannibal because he can feel the sheer hatred radiating off MC