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Kam Newton

Damn Dumbledore already showed up lmfao

Lilimadi

Et voilà que Dumbledore vient tout gâché !!!!

Kholek Suneater

Hmm, the entry for the Nundu reminds me of the one for Nightfury’s with how very little information they have. Just goes to show you how truly dangerous and unknown they are.

MacArther

Dumbledore? Oh boy, I sure hope he doesn’t wind up dead as a Dumbledore knob. I’ll see myself out after that atrocious pun.

greatGUARDIAN100

I have never heard of storm birds in Harry Potter before, only Thunderbirds

Drinor

Espérons qu'il ne soit pas assez stupide pour faire quelque chose à Harry ou Itisa.

Drinor

I Really like How to Train Your Dragon trilogy. And that description of her in the book is inspired by what they say about Toothless in the Dragon Book in the first movie.

Drinor

StormBirds is an OC Magical Creature. They are like a weaker version of the Thunderbirds.

Cruder FiveOne

Great chapter Bit the introduction of Dumbledore was a strange I think he would not introduce himself with just his last name.

Genesis87

I hope he gets to meet Newt soon, I’ve never read an interaction between the two in other stories.

Robert

With the change in the Magical Creature threat scale, are there any other creatures besides the Basilisk that would be XXXXXXX class? Or are they going to be the two 7X and then others that are dangerous will be introduced as well? I think that Harry is misplacing some of the blame on McGonnagal right now. You mentioned it repeatedly in this chapter, she’s doing what she can and way more than she has to to help him. Hopefully his ire turns towards Dumbledore. Interested in how you’re going to handle the 3 years before Harry goes to Hogwarts, that’s a lot of time. Looking forward to the next update. Hopefully Itisa doesn’t hurt Dumbledore too much 😂 Cheers!

Drinor

Harry is still too young and a little naive, so he is still angry with McGonagall for leaving him alone, but he's slowly building up his trust in her. Dumbledore won't have a good time, that's for sure.

Eva Cole

Well as long as he doesn't just let Dumbledore control him then I don't care

Matt

Kill Dumbledore and become the Savior of Slytherin? I vote yes

Gabe Sarti

So I am curious on what you plan on doing in regards to Harry's family history? Like say if house Potter is richer than it appears and a actual Noble house with properties and lands, and whether or not you plan on Harry's grandparents be Charlus and Dorea Potter, meaning that Harry is related to the Blacks by blood?