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Man I keep getting locked into all these giant spreads lol. It turns out very few of the story beats of Tempest's flashback fit comfortably in one normal sized page.

Special thanks to Slim Reapin and his multiple save files on the TRW visual novel here. My original scripts for it are long since scattered and lost so it's difficult for me to reference specific details from it when I need them. Details such as Warren specifically saying he was driving home when he saw Tempest from the road, or what exact words Isaac said when he introduced himself.

I need a name for that guardian body salesman. Something that ends in "O." Mezmo? Lazlo? I can't think of how he would ever come up again but I like him. Had to put some thought into guardian fashion here. I realize that since they have snake bodies that puts them in the Donald Duck brand of "tops only" attire. If you'll forgive a tangent, when Mazmo (nailed it) calls Tempest a pretty lady, I like the idea that he's not just flattering her to make a sale. I like the concept that Tempest IS really sexy by guardian standards. But what would those standards be, exactly? She's a glowing orb perched atop an androgynous anthro-snake body. Bodies that her kind can change at will. Even if she was somehow a particularly sexy orb, she's wearing a mask, man.

Right now I'm liking the idea that guardians perceive color and light differently. And Tempest has a sexy glow shining through that mask. Meanwhile we're almost caught up! Next week it's Nurse time in the story! :)

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Manic

I love Isaac’s power of being totally unnoticed and not being rememberable. Seriously he’s been here the whole dang time

Slim

🫡

Merjia

Isaac..? Why is there no-one in that last panel?

Slaughterbug

Sooo. Its been a while since I played the game. Was banging the nurse a part I forgot? Or is that upcoming DLC?

eF..cz

Hunko.

Alex

Body Vendor: And what about the breast size? Angry Alien: Give me the Reinbach special. BV: Ah, want to crush some soda cans as a party trick? AA: No. Skulls.

Coffee Sunshine

So Tempest literally bought from. A Snake-Oil Salesman?? 🤣🤣🤣

Chris Davis

Yep, I'm officially a Mazmo fan! The double finger guns sold it for me! Also, I love how Nikki is pushing Doug to "say something" like a girlfriend would, though I'm pretty sure their not together. As for next page, can't wait for the classic..."Helllooooo, Nurse!"

Woody

"The 'All You Can Earth' package" makes me think that these excursions are more common as vacations. That we are the intergalactic sex safari location has me torn between depressed (not worth conquering) and excited (we're #1 in the known universe at SOMETHING).

A Guy

I do love the Exposition being given from (and to!) naked ladies. Just something for everyone, y'know?

el_zilcho

It’s weird seeing a woman with normal-sized breasts in TRW, like that sample guardian body would be incredibly busty in our world but she’d have to settle for a training bra in Castlewood (yeah I know Parker and Morgan exist but they’re kind of the exceptions to this cosmic rule)

Vylon Delta

Good lord that is the worst ripper doc ever!

Reinbach

Glad that wasn't just me who considers "say something" to be a quintessential girlfriend line. XD

Reinbach

It's true it's all relative there. XD

Reinbach

Oh no she was in it. She was just hidden, unlocked by talking to Warren if I remember right. We actually had a few missable quests in the game, which I'm proud to say.

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Milo

Drosnar

Huh. Personally, I even prefer the original milk sacks. Maybe with those, she would be able to remember Is….Iso…Marc? Marius?

NKL

Bottom left panel, she looks fantastic, even if a bit dizzy.