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New bonus miniseries goooo! I've got fourteen pages done, and I estimate this story will run about eighteen pages total. Expect a new post every Tuesday until we get there.

This page was my first shot at the "American cartoon" style. I say that but I confess it's been easy for me to stray into more of an anime look as I've gone along. But I did try to put thought into what the eye shape of each character would be, and stay consistent with it. The characters have bigger heads and smaller feet. But I couldn't find it in myself to make the breasts look cartoony so they're all same as usual. XD

Typically, I avoid trying to make my characters sound "young" in how they speak. I instead opt to try and make them sound a bit more timeless for fear of coming off a bit too "hello, fellow kids" in my writing if you get me. BUT I do watch a lot of Youtube. So I'm trying to make Kristina sound like a Youtuber when she's on camera.

Lastly, this is Marley's big break! In early drafts, I had Kayden as a member of the group. But I decided I REALLY wanted Casey and Elianna. And Elianna would be too busy protecting Kayden if he was present for her to have anything else going on.

And that's all for now! Hope you guys like the experimental style. I'm looking forward to sharing these every Tuesday for a couple months.

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llCDll

This looks good! I've missed the little side comics, so having this is awesome. Can't wait for more!

Lord Washington

Hm, now I’m curious about a picture of Penny with this style, but with the focus all on her instead of being demolished.

Merjia

Ellie is SO happy 😁

Slaughterbug

Ok, this is new. A comedy based story with your characters. Im down. Plus its good to see more Kristina.

AlienBrain

Hell yeah! Love your writing and sense of humor. I have the hippo punch strip saved to my phone to this day 😂. Looking forward to this.

Squid Hills

"Lil' Twink"...? Kristina, I've seen Marley's dick. He ain't little.

ScuzzBucket

Toon Elianna looks pretty- I like her scrunching eyes as she smiles. It'll be interesting to see this style going forwards. I didn't realize it'd be SFW until you mentioned it recently. I guess this is what led to Marley being invented since you couldn't use Kayden, lol. I guess you needed a submissive guy the fans wouldn't immediately take a disliking to?

Lukas West

The style is soooo cute! I can't wait to see how this SFW story goes in a NSFW universe :D

Drizz

This is interesting for sure. Looking forward to seeing more~ 👌

Coffee Sunshine

I love Elianna's and Casey's side-talk, lol. This evening might get a little contentious.

Woody

If you are doing two different art styles, this one works. I do like your other style as a Giffen/Maguire style, but semi-Chibi/semi-anime is a good contrast.

StonesThrown

Marley just standing there like a snack

blank stare

This evening is going to be a disaster and I Can't Wait! 🤣🥰♥️🎨

Snizzlefit

While it makes perfect sense with Elianna's personality and friendship with Kayden it's funny to think that she would protect him over Marley when Markey is so very clearly the one who needs protection. Likely all the time lol

NKL

Yup, he’s dead.

Reinbach

I'm going to say that she hasn't though. This takes place before the beach chapter where he hooked up with Courtney in front of everyone. ;D

Reinbach

Not exactly. In this case I'd say Marley's quirks just fit the premise well, which led to me getting a ton of ideas for him quickly and that meant he made the cut.

Reinbach

Believe it or not Penny WAS in this style. Her face was, at least. I worked on that commission during the process of figuring out how i wanted these toon versions to look. :)

Reinbach

I'll try not to disappoint! :)

Reinbach

Thanks! I think this will make it easier to tell that I'm doing two different stories here when I'm posting pages from both comics in the same week.

Reinbach

I think because he's in his early twenties Elianna assumes he can take care of himself. Wrongly. XD

Lord Washington

Oh I remember she’s in that style, tho I’d love to see her with a focus on her full body and clothing.