Mob Sorcery Update (Patreon)
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Thank you for all the feedback and thoughts on the last post. There was way too much for me to respond to individually, but I did read it all. I suspect the issue has been discussed beyond Patreon now, which is a little frustrating given the problem is largely related to specifics of the book and makes external commentary worse than useless.
For now, I'm going to try to push on and keep posting chapters at my usual pace, particularly with the Christmas ones coming up. The Anzu chapter will need a rewrite or heavy edit, as I think it's the source of a lot of misinterpretation and appears to confuse people (perhaps if they didn't realize she was Agent?). I'm leaving it be for a bit while I work out what I want to change about it, however.