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Caleb 26 - Christmas (Patreon)

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2023-02-11 00:38:28
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Caleb and family go to the Steadmans for Christmas.

Comments

Lester Pike

This story has been a real pleasure to read. It has a great mix of plot lines. I, like many others, am looking forward to each new chapter.

omorrison

Excellent chapter.

BW

I liked the chapter, but the sex scene seemed forced and boring. Three people who were virgins months ago seem liked hardened porn stars. Why is Ness, a passionate and intelligent girl doing nothing? What did Cheryl do to leave him breathless? Why does the bond share nothing accidentally except when people are in danger? How are the girls characters growing and changing? Just a few thoughts after I read the story...

Pastmaster
>>101667098

Since I still had the intention of posting this on literotica.com Ness couldn't do anything since she's underage. Even the kiss may have been too much. Apparently even noticing a child even has a gender is too much for their delicate sensibilities. The sex you see is not all the sex that goes in their lives. If I wrote about it all that's all that the story would be. I get regular comments saying the sex is getting In the way of the plot, about as many as say more sex please so you can't please everyone. There are other factors as to why they are becoming more Liberal sexually which come out in the next few chapters. The problem is that with a series like this there are only so many ways to put tab a into slots b,c and d so it's difficult write sex scenes in new way. Apparently I didn't succeed with this one. Hopefully the next will be better. Pm

BW
>>101667098

Wow, thank you for your response. I was not expecting one. I hope my previous comment did not come off negatively but I probably failed. It was written at the end of a really long day. I really enjoy your work.(full stop,no but's) I can imagine how hard it is to try and please everyone and it is impossible. I did really enjoy this chapter. I fall into the camp of more story instead of more sex. Its not that I dont like the sex per se, but the emotions and or other drama around it make it more appealing. As you said, there is only so many ways to put tab a into slot b. You had previously requested more input into directions that readers would like to story to go so I put out a few thoughts. Please keep writing the story as your story. I will continue to eagerly await the next chapters and support you here, even if in my own mind I add details that overly sensitive websites would not approve.

Pastmaster
>>101667098

I absolutely love feedback - as long as it's constructive - which yours was. Be assured that Ness will get to experience everything you wish for her. its only a couple of months to her birthday and because of the way I have written Caleb's character - even if I decided no longer to post on that website - it would be incongruous for him to change now - They do stray dangerously close to the line though.