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I took a little break from writing Caleb - and decided to start a little vignette about another character - who gets the exact same powers as Caleb. but might not be quite so virtuous. This may be a one off. or I might write more.

As its not part of the Caleb series, and i want the feedback  i'm going to post it to all subscribers - see what you think.

Comments

Tom Ruddick

I like it maybe a little more real life response than Caleb but please don't stop Caleb I look forward to every chapter.

Jim Crane

I agree with Tom. This might be slightly more realistic than Caleb, but the Caleb series is definitely my favorite. PLEASE don't stop writing Caleb!

Pastmaster

I'm not going to stop writing Caleb until I run out of ideas for him. This story, in some ways is a way of exploring some ideas that i simply cant use with Caleb - since he wouldnt let me. Who knows - they may even meet :P

Mulligan

I had difficulty relating to the Mike and the story. Everything happened too fast. I guess Caleb is a tough act to follow. I also thought Glimmer had great hope. I would have liked to hear the wife’s story.

Theswiss24

Great story but I find it weird that Caleb who is Uber power(Mike may be as well) took some time to get his shields correct and strong and newbie Mike gets them pretty good just having read Caleb. But as I said. Great story. Anything long form like this from you is a treat!

James Haslam

Good, enjoyed but as Gary T said, everything happened too fast. Mike Hunt, lol, really?

Arnim Sommer

How much of Mikes rambling is based on actual reactions you had?

Alex Ledermann

The beginning of the Story is interesting but too short.

Pastmaster

The premises is that Mike gets the exact same powers and strength as caleb because of the wish. Also they are completely separate stories - so I dont get why you would expect the progression to be the same?

Pastmaster

I use to work in an A&E - when we were bored we would print up bogus cards and try and get other nurses to go out and call the names. MIke Hunt, Hugh Jarse, Ophelia VanKnee, Don Kiddick were all ones that we actually succeeded with. There was nothing quite so funny as seeing our lead nurse - a big rough irish guy, standing in the waiting room shouting for Don Kiddick.

DarthN8er

I expected going into this to just feel annoyed that it wasn't another Caleb chapter 😂 Genuinely really liked it though, and definitely wouldn't mind more

Jeff Morand

Greedy bastard...love it