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Caleb 44 (Patreon)

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2023-04-07 20:50:11
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It's Caleb's birthday - WIll he have a good day?

Comments

Michael Prucha

Great opening salvo. Jasmin and callum toward the end has callum spelled with one l in the following sentence.

Matthew Smith

Ready for the next chapter :) !!!

J.D.

That was spectacular. Since Caleb did a very minor flex of his power and showed he could yank their powers if need be, it was incredibly stupid to toss a threat out at Caleb. I don’t see why Maggie stopped him from taking the power from the stuck up bitch since she clearly attempted to take control of someone after being warned. I would think that trying to mentally attack or manipulate someone high up in the chain of the federal authorities. This is going to be so much fun to read.

Michael Prucha

If he took her powers it would have been viewed as a threat to all power users. That would have greatly escalated the response.

J.D.

I don’t see how it could be viewed as a threat since the Eversons didn’t have any serious power users which is why they used the Stotts. Considering it was the council who not only made slaves of them which can now be proven and they attacked first and were warned what would happen if they tried it again which they did. They clearly believe they are above everyone and laws and rules don’t apply to them and add to the fact that they have enslaved power users while telling everyone it was for their own safety and the safety of all which was also a lie. I don’t think anyone would listen or believe that the power being stripped was not necessary or unprovoked.

Asheron

She was warned. Served her right. He could have let her stay powerless for a week as punishment. Made her come crawling to get them back.

Roadspill

Waiting for the next chapters as well. It’s been great so far. Lots of ups and downs but definitely waiting for the next chapters

Jim Crane

Yeah, you and your love of cliffhangers...

Mulligan

One of the best chapters yet! I needed something upbeat, I just finished rereading the arc. The change in emotions between the two is amazing.

Ryan Hough

Damn that was one hell of a chapter and a cliffhanger. It makes it so tempting to go to the Nova tier so I can keep reading.

Karamba Chilli

... Now we wait. Eheh. Just amazing.

Hagrid

Awesome, as usual. Every new chapter that I read, makes it harder to await the next chapter. This damn story, It looked harmless until I clicked on it. Now I am like a crack addict searching for a rock to smoke. Any time I pass a computer I need to log in to make sure that I don't miss my next fix.

Alex Ledermann

As usual, another brilliant sequel. Kevin will probably also be an old military buddy of Dean. The last words are far from being said about the Everson Council and the neighbour. Thanks for this early chapter.

Alex Ledermann

I was just wondering how exactly Matilda Bree attacked Caleb? with compulsion? Is Bree a different bloodline? PM can you explain or will that come later?

Pastmaster
>>106573497

Bree is a different bloodline - but she doesn't have compulsion - she has telepathy. But she is strong. Stronger than Maggie, who has compulsion. Her attack on Caleb was instinctive - she could have taken Maggie's shields down, and probably overwhelmed her. Telepaths can play havoc with people's minds, and Maggie probably wouldn't have been able to defend herself because she wouldn't be strong enough to break Matilda's own shields.

Tasgor

Another great chapter. I am actually going back and re-reading the past chapters, and making a "cast of characters" cheat sheet. One thing I noticed when rereading. In the section with Davey Vardy (the powered toddler), the FBI agent said after putting on the bracelet that they would be back on his 18th birthday to remove the bracelet. Does the FBI have a different timeline than the council, since the removal on the 21st birthday by the council is a big plot point.

Pastmaster
>>106725294

No - when i originally wrote Caleb - he and everyone else was 18 years old. and Ness was 16. The original premise was that his amulet was going to come off just after his 18th birthday but he broke it a few days early. However my then editor pointed out that he couldnt be that age, and be where he was in his college career. So I had a choice to age everyone 2 years, (and 1 in ness's case which also made it easier to get published on literotica because although there's no sex with her before she's 18 the fact that anyone even looked at her made them ban a chapter) I thougth i'd caught all the ancilliary issues but i must have missed that one. It should read that they would go back when he's 21 to remove it

James Haslam

Loved it. Been looking forward to his birthday as was expecting fireworks. You didn't disappoint.

Johnnyjohn

While I love this story it was the last few sentences of that chapter that got me more than anything else has! Great job!

Ryan salter

Great job one of the best so