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Okay guys so here's the deal. At chapter 41 - I went down a bit of a rabbit hole, and wrote yet another ending to the story. Then I wasnt happy the way it ended to I continued to write, and now, it seems I have an alternate reality story.

The Nova level guys get this as part of their membership and they seem to like it. But I know that not everyone can afford that level of subscription so I'm putting this as asked at a lower level. I'm thinking £10

The story is about 2k words per chapter, and i'm thinking of posting a chapter per day, until you are caught up. its unedited and raw.


Be warned though - there is little or no sex in this arm of the story, and its darker, and probably a little sadder.

KR

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Comments

Roadspill

Will they be released at some point as a trickle down a few weeks later or stay there forever?

Levi Dettling

As a Nova let me say it's such an intriguing read. And it does help with scrating the waiting for more Caleb itch.

Tasgor

It is close enough that it would spoil the real ending? I’m interested, but not at the expense of spoilers.

KraytRiver

As a Nova, I say it's 100% worth it! This story is amazing, and it really helps with the wait between main storys.

Alex Ledermann

I don't really need an alternative story, especially not a sad one. A path is enough for me and I wait patiently for the next chapter.

Brennan D

PM, could you give us a teaser or the alt reality story? I’m curious, but not 100% sold on the darker/sadder reality. I enjoy the mix of light and dark in the caleb arc.

Pastmaster

Ill allow advanced level access to the 'branch chapters' so you can see where it's going

J.D.

I would be about as interested as the invisible man 😳

J.D.

Jack Griffin was the invisible man….I took a shot

Raymond

I'll definitely pick this up next month if it's still being offered

James Haslam

Don't like. Characters changed their personalities overnight. Wont be paying to read this alternate timeline.

James Haslam

Further to this Caleb had a spine before, now he wimped out. Mary and Amanda loved Caleb and wouldn't slut out of love just like that. It's just not believable.

Robots101

It's been three weeks since these comments were posted, so the commenters didn't get to see the story's progression. Personally, I find the alternate reality shift intriguing, despite some inconsistencies with the characters' personalities that you had established. However, I'm starting to get invested in the story after the shift has concluded.