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2023-04-11 19:47:52
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Here are the chapters that link the current Caleb story to the alternate arc.

Start with Caleb 41 - which begins exactly as the one you should have already read. and then move on to the other story.

Please read the regular chapter 41 first.

Even if you choose not to upgrade to get the second story - this mini arc provides an end to the caleb story.

The main arc is still going to continue, there is so much more I want to tell there, but as i said this was a bit of a rabbit hole that proved deeper than I thought.


I hope you enjoy

Comments

Brennan D

Hello darkness my old friend 😂 I feel like i need to pop a anti-depressant. Guess that’s a sign of great writing. Well done PM.

Tom Ruddick

Loved it kind of like to see Caleb go after Maggie for putting him as a dangerous criminal

Brennan D
>>106147040

^^^ that was my initial response after Caleb’s rabbit hole. After reading Jules’ rabbit hole ❤️❤️❤️

Adam Lemon

It was good, I liked it. now I desperately need back to the original story line its just too good to end that way

Javier Delafuente

Damn not gonna lie I almost started full on crying I’m tearing up right now

Raymond

Loved it but of an emotional roller coster ride I wish you could write the original and the alternate story I'd love to see how both work out

J H

Arghh! Darker, sadder and then some; well done, as always. I had to reread Caleb 41 & 42 to get my mind out of ‘the rabbit hole’. Would definitely have to read additional chapters on a sunny morning when I have something fun planned for the afternoon.

S G

It took me twenty minutes to understand that hood meant top. damn bonnets and your English ways ;) loved the story

Pastmaster
>>106215274

lol we'd call it the roof - i thought that might be what you called it - darn trunks and hoods and stuff....

S G
>>106215274

at least in the NE of the ole USA Vernacular is putting or taking the top down/off to go for the ride. The meaning eventually clicked and cleared my minds confusion lol

Alex Ledermann

not my construction site. Caleb is a problem-solver for me and not a I'll-go-away-when-it-gets-difficult kind of guy. This would be the end for me

S G
>>106220453

to be fair he solved the problems he was having. think of it like a boss firing his staff or shutting the factory and moving it to a new site

Ryan Hough

It was a good read. I like the original storyline better but I believe that this is showing the very realistic way that things could go for Caleb. Also kinda makes me dislike everyone but Jules because I can see the other three ladies doing this especially Mary and Amanda.

Alex Ledermann
>>106220453

This course of action is certainly also a realistic continuation, but it's just not my thing.

Darion Williams

Are you done with the original story line?

bigfoot08

Interesting alternative story arc, not sure if it is my thing, i guess time will tell. Spottet one (kind of big) inconsistency: at the point the two storys diverge in chapter 41 Caleb has not yet had his birthday and in the new arc he leaves before it. So Jules could not have given him a "Fuck It" shirt for his birthday...

Pastmaster
>>106296198

yeah - i know - i kind of spotted that after the fact - but decided to leave it in - but spoiler alert - you know what Jules is getting him for his birthday :P

Craig Button

Probably more realistic than the fantasy world of the main story line.

Rene Churchill

That's a drastic change in Caleb's normal behavior and a dramatic way of removing the character bloat that the Caleb story-line was suffering from. Pastmaster had a slew of interesting characters in the Caleb story, but more than could be easily handled in a single story thread. Is he going to get around to unlocking the remaining 3 Caleb chapters to the lower tier subscribers?

Mehntal1st

Maybe it's explained in the alternate story arc (or maybe not as it seems like PM is leaving the main characters behind for this) but I would have liked an explanation as to why Ness did what she did. Out of the fiancees', what she did seemed the most out of character and I would have liked to know the reasoning. Also, it would have been nice to get more of a glimpse of the emotional impact his leaving had on the girls, its like a switch was thrown and everyone just moved on, other than Jules, but don't get me started on my thoughts of him compelling her at the end... Very unfulfilling. Not sure if I want to go down this path.

Jason Bernal

This would be a great story to further flesh out. Finding out what the others did and why.

Lazy

I was re-reading Caleb & LAJ Bk 1 & 2 for the 3rd time and I noticed that the way Jules knew it was Caleb was by the f@ck it shirt he was wearing. but in down the Rabbit Hole, he left before his birthday and did not have that shirt.