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Things are starting to level out  now. After so many months of increasing membership month on month - we plateaued last month and have even lost some members this month. Will be interesting to see how this goes - thanks to all who continue to support me though.

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J.D.

I know it’s childish but for some reason that last part got me laughing so hard and people looked at me like I’m crazy but that was perfectly timed with his smile. Excellent chapter as always. I am anxiously awaiting the next release (just like Hobbs is) to see how things pan out…or don’t.

Loqi

I was amused by the author's note. I'm a software developer and information security officer, and in my spare time I'm a competitive powerlifter and amateur fighter. I wouldn't be able to read much of anything if I were really bothered by inaccurate hacking/coding scenes, training sequences, or anything to do with martial arts. In most cases, the real thing is far less entertaining and narratively useful than the fanciful version in media.

David Long

Excellent chapter. Pops calling was exactly what Caleb needed. Love the support from the girls and the rest of his family. The end was spectacular.

Jason Bernal

I try to support as much as I can but am currently out of work so it's hit and miss. But keep up the great work.

Dustin Harlan

Whaaat, you’re telling me the frantic typing and immediate access to every account and related material isn’t accurate?

Dustin Harlan

I loved that almost the entire chapter was him dealing with the internal conflict. I’ve not taken a life directly but through my actions and several others a life was lost and 16 years later I still think about it. And there was a lot of self doubt and recriminations when it happened. I also didn’t have the support network Caleb does, so my coming to terms was not as rapid. This was a great chapter and hit close to home. Your subscribers may plateau or even drop but my number will stay steady. Thank you.

Javier Delafuente

I love the stories and I really hope you don’t end them honestly I’m willing to pay a little bit more if need be for the stories. Also loved the last part with Caleb in the cafeteria it’s just childish enough to be hilarious definitely ended the chapter on a good note also can’t wait to see/ read more from dean idk what it is abt him but I just like his personality and attitude towards Caleb

Sam Rhine

I just have to comment (no I don't, but I will/the thought has been rattling around for several months). That the campus is really located in some middle Atlantic place. This is equivalent to the mid-Atlantic accent some actors use. An accent that sounds somewhat American to a UK listener & somewhat 'British' to an American listener. The collage is a delightful mash-up of American & UK undergraduate schooling. As I've been reading there were several things that snuck across the ocean in that world (i.e., three vs. not four years for undergraduate school, the mixed ‘-our’ vs. ‘-or’ spellings [sometimes both in the same sentence or for the same word in one paragraph], ‘car park’ instead of ‘parking lot’, ‘garage’, etc.) Let’s enjoy the glorious fantasy ride in a fantasy world. The concepts & contents are so much more beguiling (I’m going to redefine that word to a non-alcoholic intoxication) then the petty details. Bravo to the author (& for that matter the editor). Please keep the good stuff coming. I read somewhere, in here, that an alternative site for this tale was State Collage, Pennsylvania. I attended several conferences there (at Penn State) & therefore heartily agree the Pacific Northwest is a much better location. Again, please keep the good stuff coming. Thanks!

Mark Woods

Another great chapter 👏

L

I'm looking forward every week for the new chapter. I hope you'll keep writing, at whatever pace fits your circumstances. Love to see what this story brings in the future!