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David Long

Great chapter. Glad the rumor mill was burned to the ground. Unfortunately, now appears that Caleb is bent because he wasn’t consulted about how the rumor mill was going to be handled. Dana was so correct saying that Caleb would have objected even though it needed to be done. Please have Jeevan and Meena talk sense into him that as he always likes to say that he wasn’t looking for stupid girls so, when one or more do something for him he might not be consulted about how it’s done.

J.D.

Excellent chapter. It’s always interesting to hear others points of view and even more so considering it cleared up much of the questions about how the shooting all came about and the backstory of how the witness protection agency became involved. I did think that when Caleb was looking for who to talk to about the entire situation, he would have gone to the karate school and spoke with Kevin which is almost like speaking to “pops” but I missed the mark on that one. It did make me wonder whatever happened with the karate school and teaching there?

expat953

I suspect we'll find out that his anger is stemming from something else, he seemed to be coming to terms with his anger over the ethics class events while in his back yard, and he himself couldn't understand why his anger was raging. Hopefully Jeevan will help him dig down to the cause.

Mehntal1st

I enjoyed the chapter up til the finale... I thought we were passed this indignant attitude for Caleb. It doesn't seem like something he would fall prey to at this stage. I'm hoping we find out there is something physically or psychologically wrong with him that Jeevan can fix because if we are getting "butt-hurt" Caleb back I'm going to be very disappointed.

Javier Delafuente

I’ll admit I was annoyed why Caleb was getting so butt hurt abt the girls going behind his back but than Caleb didn’t even understand his own rage and couldn’t explain it and now I’m curious as to the reason. That was a good little “twist” if u wanna call it that. Also hope everything is good in rl

OkieDokeDude

Hmmm. Finale was upsetting. I don’t want the ‘angry at the world over the least thing’ Caleb back. He’s matured and moved well beyond than childish self. The emotion built gradually and over something he would have been grateful for just a few days ago, so hopefully it’s something that can be understood and reversed. Or, at the least, controlled.

RA93CC

It appears that Caleb is experiencing the results of PTSD. His level of anger towards his loved ones help is irrational. Jeevan is the one to see. Thank you for another well written chapter.

Ulysses

I think Caleb is behaving in character. While his powers allow the rapid assimilation of diverse skills, changes in personality are going to be much slower. His basic rebeliousness and resentment of being manipulated aren't going away overnight. I find this part realistic.

Posiden

I understand the mental health aspect in the aftermath of a big life event. This sets a growth and maturity on a young man to advance Caleb's story. I don't understand the motive behind Darryl (Mr. Kumbaya) though. Influencing a student body of a college is a full time job! Ask anyone who ran for student government offices. For a half rumored shooting he had no information about? This is a major psycho/stalker behavior that Caleb isn't getting a vibe from? I guess I'm missing the feel of early chapters where it's mission accomplished/problem solved and on to the next "thing." Anyway, looking forward to the FBI test, The Ranch Vacation, the housewarming party (with Angela's Ass), and to Josh and Louise putting Keenan through his paces.