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So I've been doing a lot of last minute re-writes of these recent strips, and I think it was because I originally wrote these back when the baby was due soon and I wasn't getting much sleep, lol.

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Disbet

Clever use of steam to hide what needs hiding! This is the first time I prefer a white strip over a red one.

Omagathief

It is a typical anime technique to hide all the naughty bits (the mysterious white cloud).

Disbet

Sure, it's just that I find it particularity well executed here. Actually it may be that I find Fiona's body way too perfectly smooth.

RobinHarper

Out of curiosity, too smooth as in no body hair or blemishes, or as in no detail?

Disbet

Well I had to think about it more. Body hair or stubble is not an issue (and you addressed shaving in the next strip). Re-reading the updated comic, I think it's the way the vulva is drawn, most often a discreet small line. I don't know if it's the lack of volume or something else, but it feels a bit "off" to me.