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Hello everyone!

Oh my gosh, I can't believe it's been thiiiiiis long since my last chapter of this series. I absolutely love writing for it, but like with all my other series, I got caught up in all my other stuff that I wrote, and before I knew it, it had been over a year since my last chapter. It really hasn't felt like it though, I think because I've had this series and its future chapters in my head constantly haha.

But anyways, I love Sailor Jupiter. My favs are Sailor Venus and Pluto, and I miiight say I like Sailor Mars as my 3rd fav though I'm still not 100% sure, BUT whether she is #3 or #4 (honestly, I will probably have it on record that she is most likely my #3 based on how I'm feeling right now hahaha. I love Rei, but I mostly think she's hotter than Makoto. Again, not that I don't love Rei as a character, but-ARGHHHH) but I LOVE Sailor Jupiter. I love her design, her boots, the color of her hair, her ponytail, I love her personality, how fun she can be with the others, but also how she can have a good head on her shoulders, I love how strong she is, but also how she's not afraid to unabashedly be into things that are girly like wanting to get married, which I feel only makes her more strong, AH, I love Sailor Jupiter so much!!!!

So, of course, that meant that I was very excited to get to her chapter. For someone so strong, I knew I wanted to do something special for her. Now, regarding that, this chapter might not be exactly what you were expecting, but I very much enjoyed writing this scenario for her. Might have said this before but out of all my villainesses I've written for, writing for Esmerelda is probably the most downright fun I've had writing for because she feels the most delightfully evil and who has fun doing it. So, pairing her with the strong Jupiter was a scenario I had a lot of fun writing.

Now, the MOST fun I had writing was the intro and the conclusion, you'll see when you get to it ;)

I've found that writing Esmerelda's interactions with her Sailor Guardians turned slaves is some of the most fun I've had writing fanfic, and I think this chapter takes the cake for the best scenario I've written so far with them. Writing the pure and valiant Guardians of light being derived to and used as the dark and evil Esmerelda's faithful and passionate slaves is oh-so delicious!

Please, let me know what you think of the new chapter! I would LOVE to hear your thoughts!

Also, I will make a more official post hopefully later today or this weekend, but I will be taking a break for the month of April!

Hope you have a great weekend everyone!

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Setokaiva

That was delightful! I especially liked the other little elements to it, like Esmerelda really training the other three, and also the kids who emulated the Sailor Scouts. Little bits like that add to the corruption so much. At first, I thought maybe Jupiter fell a bit too fast, but I actually kind of like it, as it also shows just how much stronger Esmerelda's charms have become since she got three out of five of them first. Jupiter's probably the most vulnerable out of them to this sort of thing, anyhow.

shamoto

That's awesome to hear! I'm glad you liked this little details! The training was def my fav part to write! I also really wanted to showcase Makoto's life right now, how much of it is great and on the right track, only for Esmerelda to come in and ruin that tranquility. I really thought the kid thing would really help to emphasize the Guardians' wonderful sisterhood and friendship in contrast to what it is becoming with Esmerelda! Plus, I like to think the scene did a great job in characterizing Makoto and her big sister qualities, which like you said, would add to her fall later <3 I was also a little worried when coming up with this idea about her falling too soon, but I realized like you said, it showcases how strong Esmerelda is becoming and to me, Makoto falling so fast, Esmerelda worming her way through her defense to capture her so easily felt like such a delicious idea Thank you for reading and for your comment! This made my day <3