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Hello,This is to solicit ideas for some things that you all would love to see, surrounding MM.

This is my ask:

First: Post a comment below, beginning with <Story>, <Patreon>, or <Other> followed by what you'd love to see. (SFW, Please)

Second: Like those you agree with, and I'll see what I can do! 

Regards,J.L.Mullins

Brief explaination of categories:

<Story> - Something you'd like to see in the story.<Patreon> - Something that would improve your experience as a Patron.<Other> - Something that would be of interest to you as a fan of MM.

Examples: (Some silly, some not)

<Story> - Tala explore other continents<Patreon> - Posts on every meal J.L. eats!<Other> - T-shirts for Team Kit or Team Devi

Comments

Skarsol

Progress on the mind wiping mystery man storyline!

Aaron

Terry beak pics 😍

ciaran mullen

Terry stealing food from clueless bystanders

Kapelteta

Story - Tala accidentally yeeting something out of the atmosphere with her gravity control. May be hard to convey but I could see something like a photographer asking her to throw thier camera up really high into the air so they can get a pic from up high, and Tala slowly realizing that she might have sent it too high and she has to now explain that to this really earnest photographer who just wanted to get a great picture of the continent that thier camera is not coming back. Doesnt have to be this exact scenario or anything, but that is what came to mind when I was thinking of why she would be sending something up that high. FYI- patreon app comments don't seem to like when things are in angle brackets <>

worldly bee

Story: more on using magical foods to acquire phenomenal cosmic power!! Being a foodie is the true path to godhood

Dominic French

Story- I'd Love to see Tala form a bond with the living metal and have them be part of her floating blood field

Kapelteta

Pics of his beak or pics from his beaks perspective? Lol

David Brims

(STORY) - Tala visiting her family and resolving her feelings about being dumped with all their debt

Jackson Ragland

STORY I would love to see some of the founts of magic as I feel like that could be a place to really show off your creativity

Guthan

Story: Cat girls like in ffxiv. Tolken style elves. Void monsters.

worldly bee

Story: having Tala talk to some non-archons and have them be really surprised by the things she considers normal. Seriously, with all the archons we see all the time, I feel like we've kinda lost track of the perspective of a 'normal' mage like those she traveled with in the first caravan trip

Derze

Story: Tala talking with Arcanes ; Ethics of Humans as power sources( as in why humans don’t use humans as fonts if there is a benefit to get a majority of the pop. Magic) ; a bit more on how inscriptions affect passive/acquired effects; Patreon: artwork. Other: World/ City Maps?

worldly bee

I couldn't stop thinking of that! Like she's already got Terry, but having a literally bloodthirsty symbiote bound to her blood, getting... smarter over time would be awesome. I imagine it'd be really useful for her floating blood field too, like maybe having it react instinctually to attacks like Gaara's sand in Naruto. And I feel like this iron elemental would probably be key to keeping her 'iron defense' relevant in the later game. Maybe.

Findell

Story: Going to the city with Tala's parents. Story: Going to a City with Ocean Access and seeing the crazy monsters. Story: Going to one of the Cities under contstruction

worldly bee

Story: flying island gravity fount w waterfall bc u gotta

Dominic French

Yeah I also thought it would allow her iron defense to be an evolving defense since it should retain it's anti magic capabilities, and I was hoping it could bond with her blood with iron particles or something

Wundermelon

Story: Tala could accidentally/intentionally bond with Kit using a flipped archon star, it already acts seemingly based off her subconscious desires so I wonder what could happen...

Mountainking

: More weird highly specialized archons

Sael

Story: First, I want to say that this idea is something that Aila Aurie (author of Tori Transmigrated) has started doing recently. Occasional or very occasional side chapters from the perspective of a side character with no real impact on the plot, basically summarizing their lives and giving a different view on the world. I think that this type of chapter helps expand worldbuilding immensely, I would love to see what one of the caravan cooks, smiths, other archons/mages, or even arcanous beasts thinks of the world and how their interactions with Tala differs from the norm.

CaughtRedHeaded

Story: bonding an iron dasanach with a blood star

Sand

Patreon: Examples of the foods Tala eats 🤤

Cirex123

Story: Tala somehow acquiring and then rehabilitating a slave or an apprentice

Gunnar Crider

Her experimenting with either conceptual magic, or teleporting.

Gunnar Crider

Or her getting eaten by a giant monster and killing it from the inside out, giant as in could swallow a city with ease

Robert

Story - a Terry based inscription. We've seen the absolutely cool melding of magic to other magical things, so I feel like a precursor/loophole might be possible instead of waiting for the bonding.

Robert

Patreon - art! The inscriptions. Inscriptions as seen from the eyes of the main character as she takes the antlered fox down. Maps? Possibly even just 'scraps' of maps so as not to pigeon hole your geography.

Robert

Other - definitely some cool inscriptions graphic tees.

Linkan

Patreon: posting the chapters with an epub file so I can use my favorite app to read the chapter or my Kobo reader :)

Andrew Goudie

Story: Tala bumping into someone from her class in the wilds and having to show how much more powerful then them she is.

BurnNote

I've been wondering if the story will go in that direction, it would certainly be cool

Aclys

Story: Tala meeting her parents/family and working through some of the many issues she has that she cant, or at least has not seemed able to punch or train into submission. Also seeing Terry interacting with the family, be a big hit with the kids I would imagine to the distinct terror of the others! :D

BurnNote

Patreon: The story as a PDF. Makes rereads easier, and also archiving. Websites aren't forever, and it's also possible that a technical issue just deletes part of the stored data.

ImBaroqe

- People treating coffee addiction similar to narcotics or alcohol addiction, and Tala getting treated for it (rehab of some sort)

STORRM

based on the April fools chapter being maybe canon and other stuff kit mite be sentient already, i cant remember if we know what would happen if she bound something sentient with it, like if she bound Terry with a normal star he could body jack her like a puppet, would a flipped star allow her subconscious to be controlled? hmm maybe that would be fin kit would just constantly be telling her to eat stuff and she dose that already lol

STORRM

you know what i want mawhahahahahaha "STORY i want to see some one or something ripped up in to the sky in an overly dramatic fashion" lol also some Terry ART my head canon this whole time has been he's a emu because that kinda funny to me, if the know about the grate emu war..... we lost. but seeing as the terror bird was a real thing maybe he looks more like a purple Chocobo?

Ian

1) Some sort of flashbacks to school classes to better relay what young mages are taught there about the basics of magic. 2) Some additional contact with mages with other magic types, to see the diversity of what’s out there.

Austin McGue

interlude on some of the first humans and human settlements

Bacon Macleod

STORY - some sort of exploration of the effects of the compatibility between berry juice and her regen scripts STORY- building off the above, more ‘permanent’ power ups. Even if minor. A lot of the power ups in the story are nebulous (eg, what actually grows or improves with rank up), or relies on consumables (berry juice, inscriptions). It adds a lot of flavour, but it would be cool to see something like the natural saturation of magic in her body making her more powerful or sturdier etc (like what happens with the guards etc)

Ben Morgan

PATREON - Food Log recipe STORY - Keep it awesome!

Kapelteta

You just reminded me of a thought I had the other day. If Tala empowered kit by convincing it that it had unlimited magic by constantly feeding it when it was low. What would happen if a fount was formed in one? I don't think Tala would ever do the whole human sacrifice thing to find out, but I do wonder if someone in the story world has ever done it.

Touch

Story -Other continent yes lol -Other different train of thought magic, so as long as i had read, the current magic style are western focusing on spells, things that gonna be so good to see is dif magic system, maybe cultivation? Some secret dimension with a ruler/god who collect faith energy? Automaton👀? Chinese? Cult/witchcraft/druid/chinese style magic? -maybe more impactful power up? Like something to be dif when power up -SPACE TALA -DEEP WATER TALA -SKY ISLAND TALA -Something VERY magical for ancient family, like how magic transform magic enery to heat,water,etc. Now transform gravity as a force to magic energy and fuel FLOATING ISLAND -More mage variation, like how one person energy is mutated and make them plant specialist that can speak to plant, affect it growth n stuff. Or even specialized professions like scholars or mathematician or Alchemists/chemist? -dark side of magic society? -some isolated tyranny city underground or another dimension entirely -Another world/dimension traveling👀 -some bomb or weapon that help mundane fight mages? -another variant of human where they have organ that create what they visualize PHYSICALLY inside the organ, thus don't need inscription -maybe some different magic power up, like instead of inscription, they use natural ingredients to create potion, eat it, and get natural magic pathways? They need to learn and optimize the created script to power up? -somehow tala need to live with mudane for a while and she talk/realise she very dif with all these archon things going on😭 -Portable literal house,estate and herb garden inside a crytal ball, kit or smth -Tala got hunt by archon council/humanity!!!! For a while and get that naivety/incompetent gone!<- this is the most exciting to me -MAGIC TOWER with fully functional whole building teleportation, maybe use gravity or air then turn them to magic power, and if you can use electricity to magic that's gonna be one way to store/create magic energy -Beeg WAR -Entertainment for rich archon, like having illusionist in the theater for 3 d movie -magical artificial intelligence -An organization that research and preserve EVERY knowledge in the world whatever humam or not, and knowledge that are dangerous include -someway to track/assessed Tala EXACT progress on magic as number or words -Tala in LUXURY archon hotel/facilities, magical bed, floor, floor that can be shape into table. -University arc after school!!!!👀♥️ -Dimension with dif law of physics like, light now from sun but everywhere, gravity reverse and everyone can't touch the ground and ground is sky -my list from last night is gone bc i fall asleep....

Touch

Patreon More tala art plz anime style also good😳

Louis Nel

Story. Fewer magical...things. I'll be honest there is so much stuff going on with Gates and Spirit and Soul and Bonds and Stars it's just totally going over my head. Now we have inverted stars, soul synchronisation and I'm totally lost. It's like all these new things and Tala doesn't have enough time to properly learn them.