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Here! The unused strip for today's that I had on my mind because I made the change... like a day or two ago.

Mostly, like, I've been eyeing that first panel for an update for the incredibly important reason that you can't see Sal's shirt in it. Sure. At the time, I added that little "see next photo" arrow to cheat myself out of having to redraw it, because I was tired at the original time of drawing this, but I was pretty much always going to come back around and do my best to fit some black t-shirt up in there. I scooted some elements around and redrew. Also I guess I made it purpler. I think photos depict light differently than in-person, so it's okay that it's harder purple-skewed than the rest of the scene. Here's the final:

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Andrea Andrew

So that’s why Amazi-Girl’s been absent.

Pangab

I like the more purple light, it makes me think of the kinda filters people usually use at a party. It was very instagram. The only downside I think it Joyce’s makeup looks a bit prettier without it.

David M Willis

also i'm reminded to change the alt-text which read "there's other pictures, that's what the arrow over the face means, don't 'um actually' sal" which i wrote to cover my ass but it's no longer necessary

David M Willis

if you have to write alt-text to cover your ass you should probably change something

C

Now I'm just wondering what the other pictures were...

C

Just a photo of Sal's shirt on the table, with the text "#SorryIBorrowedYourShirtSal"

Amós Batista

Are these the unused strips you have said like 6 months ago, that you almost have to remake almost 4 strips?

Lisa

I like the update! Dorothy's jaunty angle, getting all up on Joyce's space, feels more drunk.

Gale Tazzin

the purple also makes it look like they're in A Swanky Venue

Buddha Buck

That's panel one. The other panels are her friends looking at their phones wondering why Joyce isn't wearing it.

Jasmijn Wellner

she's been roller-derby'ing instead of crimefighting

Giant Speck

The longer Amazi-Girl stays hidden in the shadows, the stronger and more daring the Whiteboard Dingdong Bandit gets.

Alina Fridberg

That's a great redraw. They both look more relaxed and playful in the second version.

Betsy

I love the panel 1 redraw! While you didn't mention it, I also like the removal of "Unfortunately" from panel 2. It gives it a bit more ambiguity as to Amber's opinions on both Joyce and Dorothy's dranks and on Amazi-Girl's sabbatical which, IMO, is more interesting.

Outrider

y'know until the next comic posted I honestly thought this might have been an end-of-storyline strip since it kinda has that vibe

HueStL

The cell phone photo being overly purple is perfect. The bar lighting already seems off in person, the purple photo suggests the bar isn't as well lit, their eyes have just adapted in a way the camera is struggling with.

Dean Reilly

It's a much more convivial vibe.