Small update on the small story (Patreon)

Sup! Just a quick little update on the 4 to 5 pages story, that's all, haha :)

OK LOOK I'VE BEEN CURSED WITH AMBITION the story is not small anymore I cannot do it IT'S TOO GOOD A CONCEPT i have fallen in love with its characters

BUT

BUT

I can divide it into parts!

Obviously I haven't gone through all of them. I'm about halfway through the second. It might come out as four parts, I think, hard to tell. But yes, the first section (chapter?) is pretty much done. I'll see if I can find the courage to post it on Monday! I've got to make sure everything's in order, that it flows well, that I haven't missed any important parts.

The latter happens! As I try to, you know, be a good writer and to show, not to tell, I forget that sometimes not telling anything actually makes a story way, way too hard to parse. Or annoying. Or even unreadable. And I've been using a... well, let's say familiar writing style. A good writing style, just one that makes this very problem easier to encounter.Ah, you know what? This is all so abstract. Theoric. Obtusian. Why don't I give you the very start of it? That's fun.

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1N72Ygmm2McTZVmIT6ZO5lOzmd3TsDUCuElOhKgYUHB4/edit?usp=sharing

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Ok, that's all! I reckon you get it. Yeah I named her Sasha, I know there's another Sasha in the darkeyeverse, I don't care, I like the name Sasha, I find it easy to type. Again, I'll try to aim for Monday, or the day after, should be doable enough, byeey