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curtis hall

Thanks for the chapter amazing o

thaughton2

That fire elemental is a kind soul.

Thundermike00

Is the next chapters going to be from these people’s POV or from randidly? I’m enjoying these guys POV and hope you keep it like that. I’m sure people like to see the brutal training regiment that randidly cooked up from someone else’s POV.

KazukiNero

Calling it now, Rand is pulling another zone 1 by pretending to be a recruit most likely Benjamin.

Jonathan

Ehhh...I don't know. Would Rand really want to waste that much time with the recruits when he could be training? I'm thinking constant training in the pod while observing progress. Plus they said there'd be 200 people, is he going to kidnap 1 for a while or just hope noone notices the 201st person?

David C

“ the rumors about their Drill Sergeant from seeming the casual brutality” from seeming —> after seeing

David C

“But after being strained for ten minutes in an entirely new manner” being strained —> straining

Connor Stubbs

Phrasing is unclear: "Please remain respectful to all instructors, and in the presence of your instructors, or you will be punished"

Joshua Little

Do you really think RG could come up with a normal name like Benjamin for himself, let alone introduce himself and talk to people without prompting?