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Chapter 1509 (Patreon)

Published:

2020-09-03 04:55:26

Imported:

2026-06

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Chapter LoRG

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Will, of the convictions forge.

Fucking savage transformation. I can see Rand looking like a monster full of rage covered in shadow that reveals his figure like straight out of a horror movie. Its like in the movie split and the man called the beast

2024-06-10 03:28

puddles4263

Corrections

2020-09-03 04:55

nethernight11

Thanks for the chapter

2020-09-03 05:07

Corwin Amber

>>43365578

'rams horns' I'm not sure, but should it be 'ram's horns' ? it currently looks wrong, but I'm just not sure if it is or not.

2020-09-03 05:11

Krazy Kanaka

>>43365578

"gather all of the strongest individual" - should be individuals

2020-09-03 05:51

Krazy Kanaka

>>43365578

"He wondered for several if he" - needs a word to measure the time in between several and if, "several seconds" or "several long breaths" etc.

2020-09-03 05:58

Krazy Kanaka

>>43365578

"impatience to dominant his aura" - should say dominate

2020-09-03 06:05

InsaneHyde

>>43365578

I think it works better dropping the s. "Ram horns"

2020-09-03 17:07

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

2020-09-05 09:34

SunderGoldmane

>>43365578

“...”Toward the entrance to the main entrance of the area...” feels like there is a redundancy in this sentence?

2021-02-12 01:20

SunderGoldmane

>>43365578

“His skin began to darken//Ed// and char”

2021-02-12 01:20

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