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Patrick Short

Also! Keep up the great work!! Can't wait for the next!!

Alexander Dupree

Thanks for the chapters i didn't quite understand what Randidly ended up with. What did the Grim Chimera become?

Luke Scheffe

It isn’t clearly stated, but it is probably either draconian now, or it has started to advance it’s technological abilities alongside it’s evolution

Palton Hammerad

Now, this is sharp. Heavy. Potent. Not many to match the way the will of the author flows between each and every word.

Kevin M

I have always enjoyed your writing but lately it feels like your writing has really stepped up, especially when describing interactions with Randidly. I can feel the tension as I read and it’s fantastic

pukeofhurl

one part of the skill was called the shade.... and he produced a black armour... sooo perhaps his skill that let him avoid... lets him become immaterial now... and the armour is probably the result of the emotions he was trapping in his body creating like scales internally from the image that he was doing with the thing in the deep hole

Kevin Mendoza

Helping the ground stabilize => Helping to ground and stabilize. Or pick one adjective since both are synonymous and using both here is potentially a unnecessary form of repetition.

drag0nreb0rn

I am legitimately enjoying reading Rand being a hard ass. Please keep him this way towards the people of the Nexus.