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Evan

Thank you!

Evan

Very enjoyable read! New plotline of the daughter out on the Frontier in a ‘safe’ place… where is ‘Neverland’ and what does that message mean… an actual ‘cliff’ forming beneath (some?) of our heroes just so that they could be falling at the end of the chapter into the depths… conspiracies and attacks from multiple (competing or cooperative) unknown factions…  so very much to unpack here! Nicely done!

GsG3n

One word, yes you are correct evil evil 😈. Loved the chapter, great story arc as always. Thank you for writing, I put everything else I have been reading down so i could read this first.

Michael56Smith

--- more Yay! ... thank you .... ;-) ttfn

Michael56Smith

-- Yeah. this was another darn ole Cliffhanger, with lots of wonderful excitement, and violence too, ... but what else can we expect our 'evil' author to do to us, .... stay tuned, same bat time, same bat-channel, ... ;-) ttfn

Cornbread

This was another entertaining chapter, but I must ask why a portal was not open to the ship? I can see that you are up to something, but the idea was like a hurricane in my brain.

C. H. Darkstrider

Simple. On Prodosia, when they made said portal, the people there have a reason to say nothing to anyone who stops by and asks about it. On Terra Nova, that's a luxury they do not have.

Michael56Smith

-- Ahh, so it was a policy decision (for the groups safety), .... fair enough, also, ... ;-) ttfn

Tom Ray

next chapter please............................

Tom Ray

next chapter please....................................................................

Tom Ray

next chapter please..........................................

Tom Ray

next chapter please.....................................................

Tom Ray

next chapter please...............................................................

Tom Ray

next chapter please................................................................

Tom Ray

so you post this once a month, correct? the last post of a full chapter was Aug 11. it is now Sept 18. that is several days over a month!!!