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Evan

I’m really enjoying the story, but I question if the sex scenes are necessary in (almost?) every new chapter. I’m not saying to remove them, but they are sometimes more of a distraction than an enhancement to the tale you’re telling, in my opinion. Your world-weaving is excellent and I’m looking forward to seeing how things continue to develop. I’m also really interested in seeing “Project Prometheus” come to fruition.

Michael56Smith

Yep, you Zigged, when I expected a Zag, .... you are certainly keeping this story interesting, ... I can't wait for our heroes, all well-armed, and tracking / hunting in the next chapter, it should be interesting too, .... thanks for the story, .... ;-) ttfn

Joe Topp

Well another great chapter never know where it will turn next

Arakasi

I agree with Evan, A sex scene every 3 chapters would be enough. Get more of the story going.

Si

Is there going to be any big ship Prometheus action any time soon ish ? Another great chapter!

Cornbread

We have a bug problem, be sure to have plenty of ammo and make em count 😉

Michael56Smith

... 'a Bug Problem?' .... use that deep woods 'OFF' brand of Ammo, .... ;-) ttfn

Michael56Smith

So, back to the Persius by around chap #80? ... I am hoping that the captain (Dugan) and his 4 crews (of Top-of-the-Line Scallywags) get a Prometheus upgrade to 4 Battle Cruisers, ... this Darkstrider universe of yours is an interesting one, ... thanks for the story, loving it, .... ;-) ttfn

Tom Ray

Next Chapter please..........................

C. H. Darkstrider

It's done and in the process of its final edit. Will be out soon.

Tom Ray

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