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Brian

Can't seem to get into this one. Too many different storylines, which will probably converge down the road, but I, for the life of me, can't figure out what this story is about. Or who the main character is.

Tom Ray

yup.... this goes in too many directions... sorry...

Scruples44

I like this story, but yes it is very heavy on introductions, so is a lot to wrap your head around.

Dracon

Well I finally got time to catch up on this one and chapter three tied in a lot of the story lines. Had to reread the other chapters tho since it’s slow to release. Can’t wait for more CH