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CC2 Chapter 1! (Patreon)

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2018-03-21 15:50:25
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2026-06
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Bsoxmk2

Yay, another chapter. Here are a couple typos I noticed. In the second sentence "Mage's Collage, an so" should be "and so." In the second to last paragraph should "sometimes weeks or years for higher ranks spells" be "sometimes weeks or years for higher ranked spells?"

Justin Pieratt

Deep down though, he knew that when someone *was* raised as a fanatic and another person shatters their worldview… well… history *doesn't* show *the shatterer * living a long or happy life

Justin Pieratt

"There *also was not any* person guiding you, so " (on a side note, as an aspiring transmutationist and professional enchanter, I completely empathize with Joe's plight about showering. If only I could figure out my hygiene enchantment that automatically cleaned a room, its contents, and occupants, life would be so much simpler!)

yankell benavides
>>11191543

Deep down though, he knew that when someone 'was' raised as a fanatic and another person 'shattered' their worldview... well... (have to keep the sentence in past tense.).

yankell benavides

there was 'no-one' guiding you, so (more succinct)

Reed Collins

Nauseous v Nauseated Even though nauseous and nauseated are often used to mean feeling unwell, many purists insist that nauseous means “causing nausea” while nauseated means “feeling sick.” Casually, it is probably OK to use both words to mean feeling ill. However, in more formal situations, use each word correctly. I understand the sentence either way, but it was drilled into my head by teachers to use nauseated and not nauseous when describing feeling sick.