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Kyle J Smith

I really like these chapters and I like the setup so far for this book. I am really excited for this series. Thank you.

Ashrothe

Hehe... I actually read this when you sent out Chapter one... 2 was readable in email but not here. Course, now I'm craving ch 3.

Bsoxmk2

I have a question on consistency, is it Mages College or Mage's College? I've seen it both ways now.

Leaf

I got confused about reading this chapter again before I realized you must have accidentally sent it with the first chapter last week. Enjoying the start of this book already, thanks Dakota!

Colin Bieberstein

...voice. “I’m level nine and *I only* need to kill a rabbit

Justin Pieratt

"Joe’s indignation vanished as he saw two people carrying *away* the tub he had just used."

Justin Pieratt

Guild quest: *Base-ic* operations. - I love the pun, but I had to re-read it a couple of times to make sure it wasn't a spelling error. I'm definitely enjoying everything so far though. Please sir...can I have some more?

yankell benavides

Why in the world did it cost 'extra' to take a bath? You’d think that even with a lowered charisma from being stinky, they would want you clean! Joe’s indignation vanished as he saw two people carrying the tub he had just used. They dumped the water 'out of the tub; the mix of mud, sweat, various bodily fluids, and blood forming a viscous liquid that protested loudly as it disappeared down the drain.' (at least that's how i imagined it in my head)

Reed Collins

I'm betting they have pretty good ways to make you gain(s) stats, don't they.