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Bob of Doom

Time for Joe to be confronted by the mayor only to realize that his buff that let him find more iffy things activates AS EVERYBODY ELSE WOULD GUESS. I like Joe but sometimes he just doesn't think. Makes me think he missed a wisdom point there

Jacob Santos

Seriously, the first thing I thought about when he received the bonus to perception was to go back to the mayor and see what is up. They did not, so the bonus won't help him find out what his intuition was telling him. Probaby some stupid shit like the Mayor is a wolfman and the people like the Mayor, so they don't want any shit going down.

Bob of Doom

It's blockade instead of blokade.

Dimokin

"but before he opened hi mouth he remembered"

Leaf

"Be careful, as combining skills with low synergy will lower the new skill’s efficy." Should be efficacy? :D

Milo miller

“Sorry buddy, she has an enchantment to zap any attackers; the sudden slap musta startled her." Should be a comma? I'm honestly not sure if this is just part of your writing style or not.

Cameron C

This character / series is really something special. I hope it sells well, because I want you to write many more!

Kai Kuchenbecker

Ooh, skill and class forging, nice! This gives some very interesting opportunities. It looks to me like there is no benefit to merging high level skills. Especially since the forged skill may turn out to suck and it would hurt so much more to lose a high level skill than, say, a level one skill. Unless progression in a forged skill takes longer than normal?

Michael Junker

Oooh. 29 comments already on the next chapter. It's either a good one, or loaded with typos.

DakotaKrout

It is essentially a gamble unless you know what you are doing. Makes for some hilarity later.