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Okay, I'm overthinking everything, says someone. She's probably right. So, uh, I've only listened to this in its current form three times because if I listen to it anymore, I will find something horribly wrong with it. So, please just, idk. Is this good? It feels good, but I've also been up for 24 hours, and my shit-sense degrades very quickly after 18.Discuss, please!

Did you have any favorite parts?

Did it get stuck in your head?

How many times did you play it in a row?

Would you share this in at least one of your Discords?

Did I achieve gap moe?

Other thoughts?

_[Hook]She prays in the fire, but she sleeps in the ashHer sins gonn’ bring her sins—redemption just don’t lastMe and War just kicked the doors in, painted halos blackYou traded heart for gold, now you can’t take it back?[Verse 1]Freak shit, baptize me in gas, uhTastes sweet, don’t need a mask, uhShort fuse, love me through the blast, uhAnte mortem with the plates and the steel bootsCame up chokin’ cuz they don’t like truthShould’ve run faster, bitchI’m built for the burn, what’s you, uhWrote your name in pretty letters on my chassis, ain't it cute?Yeah, real fuckin’ sweet, till you start cryin’ ‘bout the loot[Interlude]Oh, you mad? Did I ruin your parade?Don’t play soft with me, girl, saw the mess you fuckin’ madeGaspin’ at my touch like I’m a sin she shouldn’t tasteYou got pretty hands, but they wrapped around my waist[Interlude - Refrain]Oh, you mad!? Did I ruin your parade!?Don’t play soft with me, girl, saw the mess you fuckin’ made!Gaspin’ at my touch like I’m a sin she shouldn’t taste!You got pretty hands, but they wrapped around my waist![Verse 2]Got fodder fuckin’ duckin’ from me, speakin’ in encryptionOn her knees—(hands clasped)—sketchin’ me a new prescriptionSaid my ass tastes like heaven—girl, taste’ll trick ya'Take my mask off, let me bite back, know I’ll fix ya'I’m a killer, and your gods are looking weaker every second—Nah, bitch, you can’t see me, I am too fast (I am evil). Which one of these dead gods fuckin’ lied ‘n’ said I’m peaceful?Look down your fuckin’ nose, me, an’ I’ll burn your cathedralSweet bitch wanna' boot a monster? Do it.Sweet bitch wanna' test my patience? Do it.She asked if I’m immortal, I said, “uh, what you think, yeah”Run it while the world burns, I take it like I give itNext time she gon’ bring her sins, I’ll bless ’em too, no limit![Bridge](Do you think they can hear us?)(Do you think they can run?)They can try.[Chorus]She prays in the fire, but she sleeps in the ashHer sins gon’ bring her sins—redemption just don’t lastMe and War just kicked the doors in, painted halos blackI guess we're doin' fine, 'bout I give that ass a smack.[Outro]Church bells, cracked glass, sex toys in the atticHoly-lookin' girl, but I think she an addictSaints fall faster when they flirt because they manicTake my hand, babe, I could teach you something tragicShe don’t wanna' save me, she just wanna' see me begFunny thing is, I don’t mind the taste of lead._Key Themes:- Futility of redemption and cyclical sin- Rebellion against religion and power structures- toxic relationships and power dynamics- violence as identity- duality of sanctity and corruption- critique of organized religion- nihilism in modernity- gender and power (women can be sinners or saints, but never both)- addiction and self destruction

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Crowmy

1. I like the various tempi (?) switches between and within verses 2. The end. Ending with „Funny thing is, I don’t mind the taste of lead“ that abruptly after that flow is wild! I was glad I already sat. 3. Just once ‘cause I needed a sec to recover. Then I wrote this down and put my in ears on to have it directly in my brain. 4. Likely. Got at least one server with some Hyperpop enjoyers 5. the different voice in the interlude caught me off guard good xD

Charli Morgan

This is all good to hear! Yah, I really wanted this song to be a ride! And as always, I had a lot of fun playing with my voice. 'Tis my favorite part of making any songs. I'm getting a lot better at doing the man-voice myself, so that's cool ~ ( = ^ ‥ ^ ) / ( : : )

Celes ~{ 🍪🖤🐈 }~

Did you have any favorite parts? That first interlude where you went from low to high with your voice. I love the flow transitions in the verses. The outra is perfect. Did it get stuck in your head? Yes How many times did you play it in a row? All of the times Would you share this in at least one of your Discords? All of them Did I achieve gap moe? 100% Other thoughts? The way the outro just stops makes me want to play it again.

Charli Morgan

~ ( = ^ ‥ ^ ) / ( : : ) So good to hear this! Finally a win 🥹 Feels like it's been forever since I've made a song I really like.

timberwolfj

I might have more to say when/if i havent just woken up, but its good, i like it.

Charli Morgan

For the "Do it'", I wonder if I took Palaptine's line and put used a lot compression,...🤔

Charli Morgan

Probably flatten out the pitch a lot. Like, it would need to be barely recognizable. Idk.

Kaylin Valkyrie

Favorite parts (there's a lot, I got greedy :3): - Hook/ lines 1 and 3 - Verse 1 lines 4 and 8 - Interlude line 2, particularly the Refrain version :3 - ALL of Verse 2 and the Outro yes it's stuck in my head, I've lost track of how many time's I've played it and I'm not gonna stop. already going feral talking to some of my friends about this song. I had to look up gap moe and yeah you nailed it

Charli Morgan

Lines 4, 8, and 9 of verse 1 are my favorites, too! Okay, okay. I'm gonna have NIK get in this right away.

Josh

Disclaimer - just passed the 18 hour mark on a plumbing project, so mixing fumes from pvc primer with energy drinks. 1. Favorite part(s) are definitely Verse 2 to the end of the bridge as well as the end of the song. Love the tempo switch and the lyrics. Both feel like a really cool payoff to the more rhythmic sections of the song, and it was a cool experience in that it took a few listens to realize that it was the contrast that made those parts have the edge they did. (Also, "I don't mind the taste of lead" is just a wild line) 2.It is very stuck in my head. I keep humming along 3. At least 11? Although based on current time, prolly more like 15 or 20?

Charli Morgan

This is good news! Thank you ^_^ Contrast is very important in music, as it is in anything beautiful. I try to do it in all my songs, though some didn't get the treatment. Anyway. Yeah! Thank you!!! Do you think I have a hit on my hands with this one?

Josh

Sacrifice 3 goats under the new moon to the old ones of the algorithm and you certainly should? With the typical allowance of "YouTube algorithm feels like it's been a bit of a dick for the last year or so"?

Charli Morgan

Okay, I'll make it public so you can share ❤️ But only for today!