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Hello all!

THANK YOU to everyone who picked up Great Power and No Responsibilities, and thank you again to everyone who showed interest here! I'm so glad you showed me the story had an audience even as I revised and changed it.

And now, back to GRAND THEFT SORCERY!

This month's chapter takes us directly from meeting with Omar and getting the lowdown on supernatural situation in LA (last month! scroll down!) to active shenanigans. From here, things start to explode.

As a general update on this story, I've pressed onward in the drafting phases and I'm near the climax arc. As I've been writing, I have realized I need to revise and insert some stuff all the way back to chapter one (I think it needs a general bad guy/political scene away from Evan), and some revision on the general state of LA. This is all to say that yes, the bulk of what you read here will remain in the final form, but the book itself will still be very much worth the read. That's the whole point of drafting, I suppose. :)

Give this chapter a read, and let me know what you think!

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Karl-Johan Norén

Thanks! Only story-wise comment I have is that Christian's change of heart (for lack of a better term) felt a little easy (for lack of a better term). He doesn't really sound like a formerly entitled dude with anger management issues who has started to realise he really is a small fish and that he's thoroughly screwed. Speaking as a Scandinavian, there should only be one f in Olafson.