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Goldenwing114

I think that’s a really fitting power for Akeno to get. Great chapter as always!!

Helen of Boy

Well, Akeno may not have gotten anything big and flashy, but I'd say that's a pretty nice power all the same. (Semi-serious question: is it just the commandments, or all of the generally accepted "sins"? Does Original Sin count?) And the one she got for the company is pretty great, too, even if it'll probably go unnoticed in the grand scheme of things as it's kind of a luck thing. But I'm kinda glad nothing actually ruined the night for her, and that kinda includes her getting something so amazing that it'd call a halt to things. She'll get more chances, but I think a nice lovey-dovey date is probably worth more in a lot of ways, especially when she'll have more chances.

TheOchreKnight

Well, a small win is still a win. At this point getting validation as a woman seemed more important for Akeno, and so she is rewarded, which I really like. Love how you portray her more vulnerable bits beyond the playful exterior she's got going on. The fallen check-in was really funny, Nanael's really making them work.

Ebiris Fanfiction

I don't want to get too theological with it, because DxD sure doesn't, but Akeno's judgement power is pretty much keyed off of generally accepted Christian sins without getting too weird about shellfish. Original sin doesn't count either, there's a free save from that! There's a reason Akeno doesn't get any mental insight about the sins so I don't need to stress tracking them too much. A bad guy is generally noted as a bad guy!