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Helen of Boy

We return to the beginning, the joke comes home to roost. And Jiro is more into it than he would've ever admitted in the first chapter. Seems like Aoko might help melt the ice between Yuuka and Sona a bit, with the comments about school. And while Jiro might be annoyed by the peanut gallery (even if Saeko's way to dismiss them was hilarious), I kinda love having them there to comment, even if smaller groups or even duos can be fun, too. Though some of that dirty talk... well, Jiro's already admitted he's an NTR stereotype, at this point, and he seems to be leaning into it a touch (at least in private, with people he's already dating).

Zerak

You know writing a list of medicines he thinks are useful and consulting Sona on which he should focus on next and why (pros for which is needed most, even if off screen) would be a good bonding opportunity, it would let him see how she thinks, and give him some better understanding on the medical industry from the inside.

Layout

true Sona seems like the girl who is attracted to competent partnership.

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true Sona seems like the girl who is attracted to competent partnership.

Uzi_arts

Let's go. It's been a while since last chapter. Man I missed this.

Einar Strandberg

The roleplay sex was hot, but it was also fun and characterful. All the side chat was great. My fingers are crossed for a full BB roll in the future.