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The ANCIENT Potion Masters of Nogtxu-Ghul Return!

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Chumlee99

Mrs. B: That’s it, if I make it home, I’m taking up a safe hobby like knitting and no more magical shenanigans!

B

Whoa, cool design for the potion masters and some epic creative writing to go with. Awesome job!

Blue Sammy

The life of a potion master can be very short lived. “Flesh galloped to cover the bones” is such a wild phrase. I don’t know if it’s just me or intentional in your writing style, the intensity of the situation just leaps out of the page. Definitely holding onto the edge of my seat, what a nail-biter!

David Rudisill

That one potion master was like Oscar the Grouch to Peter Ustinov the garbage man in The Muppet Movie. Peter: "What are you doing here?" Oscar: "A very brief cameo." Peter: "Me too." Mrs B. was so scared, she milked herself! What a concept! Even though the potion master's "laughing finger will never point again," https://youtu.be/7FuMYvXlBF8?is=65Zp_oVNT6ZYJh9M [Lamb of God, "Omerta," live in Philly, and there is no end to the amount of ass this entire album kicks] his brothers will avenge him. Great work on Mrs B. and on the newly resurrected owl thing.

UDDERScomix

'The Newly Resurrected Owl Thing' XD Yeah. I guess that's one way to describe them.

UDDERScomix

Thank you! It was definitely meant to be intentional. I'm just glad it comes off as exciting and 'too quickly paced'.

UDDERScomix

Thank you so much! That really means a lot!

UDDERScomix

She won't even want to hear the letters D&D unless they are referring to bras she out grew long ago!

Chumlee99

DDDD in her case, maybe full on MM