Script Excerpt: a sample of notes (Patreon)

This bit from my notebook is interesting not really for the script, which didn't change a lot on its way to the final, but just because it includes several notes from myself. Here's them annotated, since my handwriting is bad, the italicized bits are my notes:

ARIZONA: I would prefer to avoid poisoning a child, generally.

KAY: Wimp.

*it MAY pose a problem for them to be talking back & forth over a table for 3 pages of script. They might need a lot of business to do.

KAY: You know any of these goat people?

ARIZONA: No?

KAY: Whynot?

ARIZONA: Why would I?

KAY: You said you eat here.

ARIZONA: I don't like, do square dances here.

What

KAY: You know these people?

ARIZONA: No.

Why did I write this twice?