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Episode 1.19.1P available to Recruits+! (Patreon)

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2023-08-27 19:56:54
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2026-06
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Greetings Recruit!  Here's episode 1.19.1P, "The New Girl".

This was a controversial episode, receiving by far the most negative criticism of any episode of Female Agent. I made some scene edits based on the feedback, but be warned this episode missed the mark for a lot of people.

Please let me know your thoughts – positive or negative – so I can take them into account in future episodes.  Hit me up here or on Discord!

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Xcribar

BTW just watched “Who is Erin Carter” and it felt like one possible storyline for Female Agent without the sex.

Chiz

I wouldn't beat yourself up about this too much. It's a lot of work involved, and while some of the feedback might be warranted, it's still an enjoyable experience. Adjust what you feel is fair, and then push on to the next chapter - I know I'm not alone in hoping the agent's (d?)evolution into being a bargirl happens soon!

Steve C

OK. So, I have few things on my mind. First some praise. I appreciate you changing Emilia's stage name. I'm glad you caught that error. The fact that Kate can now avoid blowing chunks in the sink is also a positive change. I did pick up on at least one error. There's a scene where Kate walks into the dressing room and is addressed by her real name, not her cover name and not her stage name, but her real, legal name. I'm pretty sure it's not the only time this has happened either. I do remember coming across that in a previous update; I just don't remember at what point in the story it happened. It seems like this edit corrected some of the issues your patrons were having. However, there are still certain issues that you missed that still need correction, should you choose to do so. It's completely up to you. I pointed out these three issues in a previous post. First issue: I still don't care for Kate's office interaction with Nin. If you want to leave some of her negative reactions as options, that's fine. But it would be also good if there were some dialogue options early on that don't have her reacting so negatively. You could still have Kate act like she's not crazy about giving Bonaht a BJ, but maybe in not such a defiant manner. Second: I'm struggling accepting Kate's attitude toward Bonaht, as well as her general attitude regarding the whole BJ situation. She's done far worse, and yet she continues to act as if giving a BJ is the worst thing that's ever happened to her. This attitude is clearly evident when she's in training with the other barmaids, and it just feels out of character. She's trying to fit in and not arouse suspicion, so her change in attitude is counterproductive to her mission. Third: The actual BJ scene is still unrealistic. Steph is nearly literally holding Kate's hand. It's as if she's a little girl learning to ride a bike for the first time. There's too much coddling. Kate's already had full on intercourse with two of her bosses, yet it feels like Steph is treating her like a virgin who's never given a BJ before. There's gotta be a way to tweak that scene to make it more believable, based on the more hardcore experiences Kate's already been exposed to. I hate to sound like I'm nitpicking, because this story is still the best thing on the internet. I'm just trying to offer you my suggestions for how it can be even better.

Steve C

Oh, and one more thing. Kate's disgust at giving a BJ contradicts the fantasies she masturbates to at night. I know that they're just fantasies, and not the same thing as actually doing the deeds. But realistically, how can someone with such detailed, pornographic fantasies have such a negative reaction to giving a BJ?

Xandalphon

Playing this chapter again, i finally understood its meaning: the realization, by our heroine, that the imaginary line between fantasy and reality, between fucking Connor and fucking anyone, practically doesn't exist (or at least, exist(ed) only in her mind). And also, that nobody gives a fuck (metaphorically)if she crosses it or not. So, 'fuck it', as she said to Emilia, her mental barrier sort of crumbled down. So, Crush, your idea was really spot on (AND in the rcorrect point of the story, not too late as someone said), Kate NEEDED a sort psychological breakthrough. What led us astray, not understanding your real intentions, is Bonhat. To us Bonhat is not a stranger, is a 'sort of Connor'(and she already supposed that the girls fucked him more often than not), so 'why the heck she is overreacting like that?' was our genuine first reaction. But, from another point of view, if Nin forced her to fuck a complete stranger, Kate - pervy fantasies or not - would flat out reject the idea. Maybe you should have chosen someone that 'is a client but also a known face', to justify the reaction of Kate, but at the same time, to give plausibility to her final acceptance. And also to give to us players more understanding of the path you have in mind...

Kevin

This is the first update I've played, as I'm a relatively new patron, and when I first played the game, the most recent update was the one right before this one. I can understand the criticism, and some of Kate's reactions do seem a little weird, but people also aren't totally rational, and her struggling with the situation and maybe "overreacting" in her head despite having done "worse" things doesn't seem that crazy really. I understand this is her moment of realization that she's going to have to become a bargirl whereas before she thought she could just sleep with her bosses/whoever she chose to and not officially cross that line, so I kind of get it. Overall I still like the game, still has a lot of potential for cool things to happen down the line. The only downside for me personally was the length. When the episode ended, it kind of caught me by surprise. Like I said I've never played a previous episode on its own, but rather I've only played the whole game up to the last update, and now I've played this one. Maybe this is longer than most episodes, and I haven't replayed it yet, so maybe it has some decent variations that worth a replay. As a player it felt about the same as another night in the club despite taking longer to come out. Not a huge deal, but the length was way more of a bummer than Kate's reactions for me. I swear one of the updates had said this episode included events in the club and then the fallout afterwards, which I thought to mean then events a few days/a week afterwards, but I guess just meant later that same night. Regardless, disappointment at the episode ending just means I'm excited to play more which is surely a good thing!

John Smithe

I like the revision much more. A good recovery in my book.

Makeshift

I liked how Kate has to guide a new girl while at the same time being guided herself towards her future bargirl job. The thing that I hadn't expected and felt rather dissonant was that she completely fell apart after giving a bj. I didn't see that one coming at all. I call it dissonant because I'm not really sure the reaction was warranted after how the game has gone up to this point. If Kate had gotten into an argument with Steph about it and she pointing out she's just doing the thing Kate herself is doing for Emilia, that could have caused this kind of breakdown as the stress of the mission, the worry about being forced to bargirl, and the realisation that she's helping this new girl down a path that might result in her disappearance all converge. That's not what happened however and she broke down after a bj while having had sex for mission objectives before and knowing this was going to come sooner or later. Maybe it would have felt more natural if this had happened as she got home alone and got some time to think about what she was doing, or while she was writing out her report? It happening right after, in the club while she's on her mission and playing her "role" seemed to sit somewhat uncomfortable to me. I liked the new girl and guiding her in her first day on the job. Good characterisation, like I've come to expect from this game and I'm looking forward to interacting with her in future releases. You probably know this is coming, but blimey did it take long to get this release! I feel I have to mention this despite being in two minds about it. I want to give you the time you need to come up with good stuff and present it well, but on the other hand I feel I have to give you truthful feedback. There where times where I was wondering what we where still waiting for, the development time made it feel like an other huge thing like girls night out was coming down the pipe. After having played trough the release I found it felt rather small, almost filler? Especially since a lot of the update consists off evenings in the club. I love those evenings in the club, don't get me wrong, but they don't feel like the most complicated parts of the story to tell. Having never developed anything like this before I could be completely wrong about it, but they have a rather well developed location, structure and characters to lean on. I could have imagined the development would take a long time if we'd get into proper bargirl territory because that would require a drastic change in what the club nights are and therefore needs a decent amount of setup. In the end we just dipped our toes in. Maybe a lot of development time went into making that jump and it's somewhere on the cutting room floor? So, lets tie this together. I liked what I got in the end, but it took a long time to get it for what it was. It's alright to have a filler episode from time to time while developing on bigger plot twists in the future. It's fun to have a new character and Kate now acting as a big sister for the new girl. I also liked Miss Nin in this episode, and I'm looking forward to interacting more as she'll become Kate's new boss. So, long story short. Keep up the good work and keep developing the story. Just don't leave is with blue balls to often XD

Steve C

I agree with most of what you said. This episode did take a long time to create, but I normally can overlook that, because what we are rewarded with is typically phenomenal. I didn’t feel that way about this episode. The trouble is, we’ve been building up and building up to something grand, while Kate has mostly accepted her fate, developing a stronger tolerance for what is to come. At least that’s how I’ve chosen my character’s path. Each episode was a step in the direction I assume we all want her to go. This episode, however, felt like she took several steps back, and now we have to start over from scratch. With most stories, no matter what type of content it has, there’s a gradual progression as it goes along, until the story reaches its climactic conclusion. With this one, this episode provided a definite sense of regression. That was my biggest disappointment with it.

Nosey Dewdrop

how come theres no recent version with supporter anymore?

Donavon Clark

There's fantasizing and then there's doing it in real life. Plus, at least the way I personally role-play this is at least half her problem is the lack of agency. You'd think Connor 's nightly fucktoy sessions would have already done it, but Connor never actually *forced* her. Overcame her minimal reluctantance with force of personality after an entire shift to ramp her up, sure... but that's not the same thing as *forcing* her.