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The Waterpark: Part 3 (Patreon)

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2022-06-26 15:11:01
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Here is part 3 of 'The Waterpark,' it has been a lot of fun working on this project.  Once again, I got to 3,000 words so I'll be sure to post something else this week to get to 4,000.

Feedback is appreciated, I hope you all enjoy!

Comments

Rune Ebsen

Great story, i really like it. Would have liked some more teasing between the girls, and see it more from their point of view, but overall pretty great.

polarisdreamer
>>86555013

Yeah, I see what you mean. I kept the perspective the same as the original, so considering I'm stuck in first person, it's not easy to write the ladies interacting with each other. Perhaps I'll try and add some of these types of interactions when I get to the fresh stuff I plan to add to this story.