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The Waterpark: Part 4 (Patreon)

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2022-06-29 21:36:44
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Here is the next part of 'The Waterpark.'  It's 3,000 words which puts me up to 6,000 this week!

This Sunday I'm going to focus on getting at least 4,000 words of the latest 'Fed Up' draft relatively finished so I can share it here.

Anyway, thanks for all the support!  Feedback is appreciated, I hope you all enjoy!

Comments

BlommStarr

Great development with this story so far. I think you've set up a very intriguing deal that Jillian could exploit..

Rune Ebsen

I like the story, not sure that it needed to go beyond summerbreak. But i am not going to complain:)

polarisdreamer
>>86808851

I'm just taking it to where Philled Up took it, providing a climax to the story and some resolution. All love triangles have to end eventually and I am thinking I might let my patrons decide who the protagonist decides to end up with, Jillian, or Beth, or neither of them. Or perhaps I'll write two endings, one choosing Beth, the other choosing Jillian. tbd