The Waterpark: Part 8 Version 2 (Beth Ending) (Patreon)

Hello everybody,

This has been a busy day for me and I did not get much time to write, but I did manage to finish this alternate ending to "The Waterpark", so at least that's something.  It's a beefy chapter, almost 6000 words, so hopefully it is enjoyable, I know a lot of people voted for the protagonist to choose Beth, so this is what happens if the protagonist wanted her more.

I now think I'm done with "The Waterpark", I'm going to focus my efforts this next week on an update to "Fed Up" for sure, and try to squeeze in a bit more writing than I was able to manage this week.

Please let me know what you think of the Beth ending, and if you preferred the Jillian ending instead.

Have a great week!

-Polaris