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Okay, managed to get this one done today.  This is hopefully a full draft of part 10 of 'Fed Up'  I sent it to Piengoo so I might have to edit or add scenes to this one depending on feedback.  We'll see.

I added a little under 4,000 words to the previous draft and highlighted these new developments in blue for people who don't want to read the beginning again, although I also edited the beginning a bit, mostly minor edits and text fixes.

Thanks to Patreon Sunday's have become my favorite day of the week because I get to spend hours doing what I love, which is writing WG smut.  Thanks again to all my patrons, you are making a positive influence on my life and I really appreciate it.

Feedback on the chapter is welcome!

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Rune Ebsen

Very Nice Chapter see you are making the classic Polaris transistion into acceptance.

polarisdreamer

Heidi and Keith might be accepting the status quo for now, but they still have not resolved their conflict, might edit the chapter to reflect that a little better

Joe

Mia soon?

polarisdreamer

I want to, but I've been struggling to find the time to re-read the first volume and original second chapter. When I get time on Sundays, I need to spend it on writing so I can make patreon updates. It is kind of putting me in a bind on Mia's story. It's not a story I want to rush.