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Hey!  The draft of 'the 20,000 Calorie Challenge' is almost 5,000 words, meaning I've only got about 500 words left to hit my goal this week.  I have a feeling this story is going to be quite a bit longer than 500 more words though, so I'm posting the draft I have so far in the hopes I can get some get some feedback on it before I finish it.

Let me know what you think!  And Enjoy!

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BS Writer

Looking forward to see where this goes. I hope Hazel gets to prank her sister back after she becomes the porker.

jojoabc123

I'm liking it so far. It fun, it's light, and I like the main character. Denial is my favorite trope and this seems to fall under that. Looking foreword to more of this and the chef one!

polarisdreamer

I forgot about the chef one. That might be relatively easy story to finish. Thanks for the reminder!