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This one-off's gotten a little long, but totally worth it in my opinion.  It's quickly becoming the favorite one-off I've written.  Should have part 2 ready sometime next week.  Until then, let me know how you enjoy the first 5,000 words of this one.

Thanks again for all the support, enjoy!

-Polaris

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BlommStarr

Exciting start! Really compelling side dynamic between Diane and Charlotte, working together. I wonder if Charlotte will catch on that what’s being done Caterina was done to her by Diane in the past, given Diane seemed experienced at what she’s doing. Also, Nice work making Caterina a character that makes it semi-justifiable to enjoy the schadenfreude. Interested to see where you take her character by the end of this one. Part 1 was a super enjoyable read and can’t wait to see what happens next!

Rune Ebsen

Great start to this story, would be fun to see, How the men in the Office react to her gain

polarisdreamer

Yeah first draft they were essentially the same character, so I made some changes and I think they add another layer of interest to the story. Who knows what might happen with that